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AI RPS: Chimera 5/?

Dec 06, 2009 22:54

AI RPS Fic: Chimera Part 5 ( Read more... )

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jackycomelately December 7 2009, 04:12:41 UTC

This is an awesome story! Love this chapter! Hurt/comfort for the win!

nymphaea1 December 7 2009, 04:21:58 UTC

Yes, I do have an unholy love for h/c. Usually I fight harder to keep it in check, but after beating everyone up for four chapters, I thought it time to at least let them get some sleep.

Thanks for reading!

purplegirll December 7 2009, 04:17:48 UTC

haha, poor Danny, always the douchey one, lol, great chapter, I love all the interesting details of the background story, so different even for an AU

nymphaea1 December 7 2009, 04:25:57 UTC

I know! I do kind of feel badly that Danny's the automatic dingbat, although I will say for him in this story--at least if I do my job right--that he's eventually not a bad guy and not 100% wrong in his thoughts on things. This is not a story where Adam is supposed to be a martyr.

Thanks for the comments on the chapter. I am glad you are enjoying it!

mylittlehottie December 7 2009, 04:30:39 UTC

i'm in LOVE LOVE LOVE with this!

nymphaea1 December 8 2009, 00:44:22 UTC

That is a lot of love, thank you!

nymphaea1 December 10 2009, 20:47:34 UTC

Thank you for the Christmas Lights. They are so sparkly!

cellia December 7 2009, 05:02:13 UTC

This series is awesome. Adam's response to Danny and the mood the the memory scene of the bed were A+

nymphaea1 December 8 2009, 00:47:58 UTC

I am glad you liked the Danny-Adam interaction as I wasn't sure of it. As I said above, I'm leery of making Danny the automatic villain. And I'm trying to have the fey not be an allegory for queerness, so I didn't want Danny to be prejudiced against the fey just because of his IRL discomfort with homosexuality. But ultimately I decided it made sense for his character and went with it.

Thanks for reading and commenting. I totally do appreciate it when people point out specific bits that worked for them.

cellia December 8 2009, 02:04:30 UTC

I liked both what Adam said to Danny and how he said it, but also Danny's reaction. Much better for him not to be a "villain." The fey-homosexuality allegory is hard to break now pointed out, but I actually hadn't thought of it until you just mentioned it for this story, so I guess you were doing it right!

adammlambert3 December 7 2009, 05:04:32 UTC

Love this! Great chapter!

nymphaea1 December 8 2009, 00:49:10 UTC

Thanks for taking the time to stop by and comment. I am so pleased you are following along!