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[nyodene_d]

i've been looking for this poem forever, and just ran accross it while looking throught the files on my usb memory card thingy that i haven't looked through for a year or so (there's no title as yet - sorry

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[luzclarita]

I think you really hit your stride in the second stanza. I especially like:

with probing pale mycelium
brown fibers melt into a viscous
oozing liquid, larvae burrow through
the roots; the scent of ozone and
perpetually moist earth wafts from the
trunk, undulating in the breeze,
like the tattered ends of a feathery
luminescent blue veil.

[nyodene_d]

thank you. i've always liked the second half better too. i just can't figure out how to make the first half better.

[gwendydafaerie]

I likey. Of course, I've always liked your poetry....I still have tons of it I saved from high school.

[nyodene_d]

aieee! you do?!? do you think you could photo copy what you have and send it to me? i've lost so much...
as incentive, i will let you know i have burnt you mucho cd's and will be mailing them off this week. :P

[gwendydafaerie]

Ooh la la. I've got to find my poetry book first. I'm not sure where I missplaced it. It's either in my garage or at my mom's house. I'll try to find it for you.