Comments | nyodene_d: stream of conscious insomnia

nyodene_d

stream of conscious insomnia

Feb 03, 2006 03:08

one poem written all at once, then i chopped it up and gave each little part cute titles. nothing smart. just regurgitating so i can hopefully get to sleep ( Read more... )

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ohmiee February 3 2006, 21:13:50 UTC

I liek it.

Are you going to read it next Friday? Eh? Eh?

i liek leeks nyodene_d February 3 2006, 23:37:56 UTC

even when i just imagine myself doing it, it doesn't go well, so...i doubt it. especially since this particular one is so sloppy. even my other stuff is sloppy too: i definitely don't have down the art of rewriting.

hmm... nyodene_d February 3 2006, 23:42:28 UTC

the more i think about the more i WANT to read it there....but just thinking about it makes me sweat. arrrgh!

Re: hmm... ohmiee February 4 2006, 01:33:29 UTC

"It's better to regret something you did than something you didn't do."

I'll totally let you practise in front of a small audience (me) and give feedback. I think you have SO much potential. Especially 'cuz everyone has a pretty monotone style, "urban street rootz skills". That's a chance to shine by juxtaposition!

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