(FIC) First Time

[nyrok5]

The first time Jinki saw Kibum was nothing short of amazing. The younger boy had just moved in to the house next door earlier that day and Jinki could swear it was an angel that exited the van instead of a teenage boy.

The first time Jinki met Kibum was embarrassing. Jinki had to swallow his heart when the boy had come to his door asking if they

Comments

[rinni1905]

Aw, it's very cute and precious. ^^

Onew is so fail, but in the end he had his Kibum, right? You litte devil Kim Kibum, how dare you corrupted our pure Jinki <3. So cute, you should write Onkey more.

I really want to recommend Theia unnie blog for you because unnie has posted many Onkey stuffs there, but due to some unconvinience, she had to blocked her blog. :). Hope she'll open it soon ^^.

Love this fic ^^, especially those smexy part, so hot >.<

[nyrok5]

Hehe thank you :)

Yes, he got his devil of a Kim Key Kibum. I know he is so evil to corrupt the innocence of another like that.
Thank you, I will in a few weeks, Easter break is almost here and it means ten days of writing woot hehe.

I hope so to, I am very much looking forward to reading more OnKey since they are just like awesome and all.

Thank you so much dear <333

[nyrok5]

AHHHH REALLY??? I'm so happy you enjoyed it *giggles madly*

LOL, school and fanfictions don't mix. Bad experiences.

I must agree, Kibum is not as innocent as he seems, hehe. Lol I must agree they are one of the most perfect couples ever, they compliment each other so well :D

Awwwww thank you so much for reading and enjoying this bb <333

[theia88]

SPOT! a lot of fic i haven't read these days...*sighs*

[theia88]

whoa, it's been a while i haven't seen you around LJ and now you write this ^^
i'm glad it's onkey and though it's your first Onkey fiction, you indeed did our SHINee umma and appa justice XDDD
this whole story is very interesting..but it took one year for jinki to finally make love with kibum? wow...that's so long XDD i wonder how Jinki could control himself for a year XDD
it's fun knowing they did it everything for the first time is in jinki's bedroom XD
thanks for writing this hot smutty ^^

[nyrok5]

Awwwww thank you :D
Wah, I am so glad I was really worried about not doing you wonderful talented writers of OnKey any justice.
Thank you, and I know, if i think about it it is a little bit long but i thought because it's Jinki and he's just so obliviously densely shy I could make it that way.
Hahaha, poor Jinki's bedroom, and mom, haha XD
Thank you so much hun I'm so glad you liked it <333

[milky0way0boa]

OH MY GOSH THIS MADE ME SO HAPPY!!!! IT'S SO CUTE^_^

[nyrok5]

Awwww shucks thank you dear <333

[njrv16]

"The first time Jinki said I love you to his soul mate was the first time Kibum said I love you to his soul mate" This had me going awwwwww at the sweetness of the sentence.

Yes you did justice to umma and appa XD

For some reason the only thing running through my mind in their first time touching was 'I wonder what his mom is thinking right now and how much can she hear with the music' Kibum is a screamer after all XD

Love this so much <3

[nyrok5]

Hehe awwwwwww thank you hehe

I'm so glad that I did them justice, i was so worried because there are so many talented writers of OnKey and I thought I would fail them *scratches head awkwardly*

LOL I never actually thought of that until you brought it up >.< I should of made her run away and cry about her son's innocence being stolen by the infamous Kim Kibum :P

Thank you so much hun <333