Comments | nyruserra: [FIC] Just Desserts pt 2 of 2 (Ariadne/Cobb, NC-17)

nyruserra

[FIC] Just Desserts pt 2 of 2 (Ariadne/Cobb, NC-17)

Mar 31, 2011 18:51

Title: Just Desserts, Pt 2 of 2
Fandom: Inception
Pairing: Ariadne/Cobb
Rating: NC-17
Words: ~ 5,200
Summary: Cobb gets his Julia Child on. Ariadne finds it sexy as hell.

Written for this prompt over at inception_kink

Beta: helenvalentine

( Cobb gets his Julia Child on... pt 2 )

fanfic, inception, ariadne/cobb

Comments 6

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nyruserra April 3 2011, 10:36:10 UTC

Yay! I'm really glad you liked it ♥

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nyruserra April 3 2011, 10:44:26 UTC

I can't tell you how happy I am that you enjoyed this! As I said before, I wasn't at all confident.

*rotfl* NO, I can't imagine his lessons covered using a paring knife quite like that. It would be an interesting lesson, though, wouldn't it? >.>

Thank you again for giving such an awesome prompt (and even awesome-r reviews) I had a lot of fun writing this!

kitoky April 1 2011, 21:09:51 UTC

Hnnnnnnggg, oh~ this was so good. So, so good. The smut was delicious and just --- I also just have a total kink for dirty talk too so Cobb's... no words. I've officially melted in a puddle.

Amazing work, this is just great! The subtle descriptions from Ariadne's point of view on Cobb's reactions and stuff was just perfect. Bravo!

nyruserra April 3 2011, 10:48:50 UTC

Yay!

*mops you up* I think that is some of the best praise one can get for writing smut :D

I agree, there is something about dirty talk coming from a man like Cobb, isn't there? ;-)

Thank you again for reading, hon!

swamp_ariadne April 6 2011, 22:29:27 UTC

I love that you don't shy away from being anatomical. I love the balance that you set between romance and just good old porn. It's very early in the morning for me and I've had no coffee yet, but I just needed you to know that I read this in the office last night and I'm glad I read it then because this fic.... was effective. That's all I can say.

Will come back when I have something coherent and intelligent to say. Oh yes, bravo woman.

OK one quibble. I know she's wanted him forever and all, but why did she have to come so fast? That's all...

207 Inception Recs livejournal August 28 2012, 08:22:07 UTC

User chromonym referenced to your post from 207 Inception Recs saying: [...] nship and a clever dream-based AU element. It’s so worth a read. Ariadne/Cobb, Just Desserts [...]