SGA Fic: Learning Curve

[nytel]

Title: Learning Curve
Author: Nytel
Rating: PG
Spoilers: Up to 408
Pairing: Ronon/Keller
Genre: Fluff, Pre-Relationship
Summary: Jen gets some private self-defense lessons.
Word Count: 4,346
Beta: The wonderful

Comments

[momm2five]

Seriously cute!! I adore the idea of Ronon and Jen. SOOO hoping for this on the show. Keep going! She needs more training! LOL!

[nytel]

*g* Thank you. I'm definitely hoping for it too. ;)

[nebakanezer]

I loved it hon! It was perfect. *g* Poor Jen, so worried. I liked seeing her slowly gain her confidence and I loved when she flicked him back. That was just too cute!!! I liked Ronon thinking outside the box and figuring out how he had to adept to gain Jen's trust. I can totally see how you can continue this as either one shots or a fic. :) I hope you do.

Wonderful!

[nytel]

*beams* Thank you.

Poor Jen, so worried. I liked seeing her slowly gain her confidence and I loved when she flicked him back. That was just too cute!!! I liked Ronon thinking outside the box and figuring out how he had to adept to gain Jen's trust
--Yes, poor Jen. I can just see her making a huge deal out of it. I really liked Missing because it gave us a good insight into Jen's character, and that in turn gives me more stuff to explore/play with in fic. :) For a while I thought the flicking might be out of character for Ronon, but it was just too tempting to put in. *g* And Ronon is definitely good at thinking on his feet. ;)

Thanks for the awesome prompt!

[sireesanwar]

Okay you've turned me into mush. That was so cute! I totally loved it. I loved how Jen played "dirty". It was so fun and adorable. I really love this ship. Great job!

[nytel]

Hee hee, I'm glad to have turned you into mush. ;)

Thanks for reading, and for commenting. :)

[sireesanwar]

I try. lol

[nytel]

:)

And I absolutely love your icon. :)

[wive]

*g* This was great too!

I like how she is all nervous and he is in command... in the beginning. LOL
And the tickling was icing on the cake!

[nytel]

*g* Thank you! Tickling just seemed like an idea that was too much fun to pass up. ;)

Not sure if you saw chapter 2 or not, but if you didn't: http://nytel.livejournal.com/155860.html

[wive]

Hey! I like your ideas!!

Ohhh! A new chapter! Thanks for letting me know!

[sunnytyler001]

God, this is fantastic!!! I hadn't read any Keller/Ronon story yet... Hadn't found any actually! This one is brilliant! So funny!

[nytel]

*blushes* Thank you.

I was going to recommend sg_onesweetlove to you, but I saw that you'd already found it. ;)