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Learning Curve (2/?)

Jan 02, 2008 21:15

Title: Learning Curve (2/?)
Author: Nytel
Rating: PG
Spoilers: Up to 408
Pairing: Ronon/Keller
Genre: Fluff, Pre-Relationship
Summary: Jen gets some private self-defense lessons.
Word Count: 3,170
Beta: The wonderful
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learning curve, ronon/keller, atlantis, atlantis fic, fan fic

Comments 22

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nytel January 3 2008, 19:46:44 UTC

*g* Thank you! I've started chapter 3, so with any luck it shouldn't be more than a few days before it's posted.

lone_poppy January 3 2008, 07:03:52 UTC

**Jumping up and down** I'm so happy you continued this and just like the first chapter I really enjoyed this one. Please continue soon.

Thank you.

nytel January 3 2008, 19:51:02 UTC

*beams* Thank you! And I plan on writing most, if not all of chapter 3 today, so hopefully I won't be too long in getting it posted.

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nytel January 3 2008, 19:52:43 UTC

Awe, thank you. *hugs*

anglstrmoon January 3 2008, 14:35:13 UTC

I like the story so far.. I can't wait to read more!

nytel January 3 2008, 19:53:54 UTC

Thank you, I'm glad to hear it. :)

cascadepd January 3 2008, 16:14:02 UTC

(Ginormous girly squee!) You've continued the story!! Yay! Keller is so darned cute...I love how you're portraying her. I also like the 'Ronon feeling more like a human than ruthless warrior.' That got me...like exactly how I'd always pictured that the realization would hit him that it's safe to get into a relationship.

nytel January 3 2008, 20:00:55 UTC

*blushes* Wow, thank you. *g*

Keller is so darned cute...I love how you're portraying her.
-- Thank you! I really think she's quite cute as well. :D

I also like the 'Ronon feeling more like a human than ruthless warrior.' That got me...like exactly how I'd always pictured that the realization would hit him that it's safe to get into a relationship.
-- I'm so happy that you commented on that. It really seemed to fit in my own mind, but not all the time to things translate so well into fic. Lol. I really do think that by suddenly feeling attracted to someone again, it would make him feel like Ronon, the one from before the wraith that's still there under the surface. I mean he's come a long way from when we were first introduced to his character, but I think to fully recover from what the wraith did to him, he needs to love again.

Thanks for reading, and for the comment. :)