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Jan 27, 2006 18:34

Title: The Night That Changed All Others
Chapter Title: Chapter 7 - Aftershock
Author: Nytel
Rating: PG-13, (maybe even only PG)
Spoilers: Up to 203 for sure, but very light spoilers, if any, after that.
Summary: Teyla and John spend one night together, and they could never have imagined the series of events that would unfold because of it. These events ( Read more... )

tntcao, john/teyla, atlantis, atlantis fic, fan fic

Comments 6

nicole9514 February 2 2006, 23:50:02 UTC

Just wanted to tell you I am loving this fic and ask you if you wanted to friend me. I have noticed you commenting on my fics (which i appreciate) and that you love J/T and battlestar galactica. I love these things as well. Check out my profile and let me know, I'd love to get to know you better. :)

nytel February 3 2006, 05:10:16 UTC

Aw, thank you so much. I'm so glad that you're enjoying the fic.

Also, I'd love to friend you. I'm off to do so right now. :)

nicole9514 February 3 2006, 13:12:54 UTC

Yeah I'll friend you back hon. :)

gimp_homegurl April 17 2006, 00:24:08 UTC

I like what you did with McKay in this one. He's stunted when it comes to a lot of things but that doesn't mean he doesn't care. He's just really bad at articulating it. I'm glad he was able to ease Teyla even in the slightest. When John started to cry I felt for him, I have no idea how I'd cope in a situation like that but I know I'd be having a hard time of it. The final scene was just beyond sweet. Its great to see them being there for each other, bonded by more than just children. They love each other. Now we just need to hear that and I'll be happy.

-Dani-

nytel April 17 2006, 01:57:32 UTC

Thanks, I was really happy to develop Rodney's character a bit. I mean we know that he's arrogant, but there's no way that he's completely heartless. And he has worked with Teyla for years, they have to be friends.

And I'm glad that I could affect you with the crying. I honestly don't know how else he would react. And yes, the bonding was good. It's the twins that initiate it, but that's not the whole thing. They do love each other, even if they aren't at the point of saying it yet.

gimp_homegurl April 17 2006, 13:46:13 UTC

YES! So you admit it! They do love each other (as if they didn't and you hadn't implied that! But for the sake of my insanity...) HA ha ha! I have you know!

... It's early, I still need my morning coffee. lol Don't mind me!

-Dani-