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Learning Curve (6/?)

Jan 26, 2008 19:04

Title: Learning Curve (6/?)
Author: Nytel
Rating: PG
Spoilers: Up to 408
Pairing: Ronon/Keller
Genre: Pre-Relationship, friendship
Summary: Jen gets some private self-defense lessons.
Word Count: 4,164
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learning curve, ronon/keller, atlantis, atlantis fic, fan fic

Comments 16

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nytel January 29 2008, 12:56:36 UTC

*g* Thank you! I'm glad you like it. :)

made_of_toast January 29 2008, 00:35:26 UTC

Love the story so far! I just started reading it so I thought I'd comment here in chapter 6. The thought of Ronon teaching Keller to fight makes me wonder if the reverse would be just as funny. For instance, Keller teaching Ronon to bake. Flour-covered dreads? Priceless.

Anyway, I am babbling. Great story so far and I can't wait for the next chapter!

nytel January 29 2008, 12:58:13 UTC

*g* A new reader! Exciting. ;)

As for the reverse... I can definitely see it being just a funny. Or, imagine if Ronon could already bake/cook, and was like this marvelous chef... that'd be pretty funny too. Lol.

Thanks for the comment!

made_of_toast January 29 2008, 19:48:48 UTC

Or better yet, Rodney ruining Ronon's precious soufflé. XD

_woody_lein January 29 2008, 08:00:11 UTC

I love this story!
You are a great writer, thank you.

Woody

nytel January 29 2008, 12:58:36 UTC

Awe, thank you. And thanks for reading!

sireesanwar February 13 2008, 01:10:33 UTC

I love how nervous she becomes with Ronon. It is too cute and it really seems like he knows what she's thinking. I really hope they play twister again! lol

I wish I could sleep that long. So tired, but not so tired I can't read chapter 7!

What girl would get all nervous with Ronon touching her?