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[nytel]

Title: The Night That Changed All Others
Chapter Title: Chapter 9 - Plans
Author: Nytel
Rating: PG-13, (maybe even only PG)
Spoilers: Up to 203 for sure, but very light spoilers, if any, after that.
Summary: Teyla and John spend one night together, and they could never have imagined the series of events that would unfold because of it. These events

Comments

[sanssong]

Don't apologize! It might have been a bit expositionary, but it was still good. Nice job, I'm looking foward to the next chatper.

[nytel]

Thanks, I'm glad that at least one person is reading this here.

This chapter was basically just a housekeeping chapter. I lost motivation for the story at about the time I was writing this, and it really shows. But, not to worry, I got motivated again. One of the upcoming chapters has what I feel to be my best piece of writing. I'm not sure if anyone else likes it, but I'm insanely proud of it.

[sanssong]

Cool I'll look forward to them!

[nytel]

The next part is up!

[gimp_homegurl]

Awe darlin'! It wasn't lacking too badly. I'll admit not much happened in the way of plot advancement but over all it was still an enjoyable chapter. I think every story has one or two like this, I know I have had them. Like I said I still enjoyed it

[nytel]

Well, I'm glad that it didn't lack too badly, but really there wasn't any plot advancement. This was my last stuck chapter. Then I managed to drag myself out of the gutter and get back on track.

You are really good at portraying his character. Its because he's just so damned cool and we all love him!
-- Thanks, and that is totally the reason. Who doesn't like a snarky, arrogant, astrophysicist geek? I know of nobody.

As for John getting in a little ogling session! Such a guy!
-- Lol, he just couldn't help himself. :)