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Chapter 12

Mar 27, 2006 21:56

Title: The Night That Changed All Others
Chapter Title: Chapter 12 - Unexpected (Part 1)
Author: Nytel
Rating: PG-13, (maybe even only PG)
Spoilers: Up to 203 for sure, but very light spoilers, if any, after that.
Summary: Teyla and John spend one night together, and they could never have imagined the series of events that would unfold because of it. ( Read more... )

tntcao, john/teyla, atlantis, atlantis fic, fan fic

Comments 5

sanssong March 31 2006, 22:06:05 UTC

Sorry I didn't respond to this sooner. I've not been to the LJ in a couple of days. Nice chapter, you've definitely got the tension going between them! Poor things need some resolution soon!

nytel April 1 2006, 00:08:29 UTC

Thank you so much. :) Your reviews always mean a lot to me. And congrats on the isis award, I couldn't help but notice that you got first place in the romance/fluff category (for John/Teyla of course).

Also, I'm not sure if you saw but chapter 12 part 2 is up. I'm assuming you've read it, but I thought I'd mention it just in case.

Thanks for taking the time to leave feedback.

sanssong April 1 2006, 03:39:09 UTC

You're quite welcome and thanks for the congrats! They are in order for you as well I think! I don't think I've read part 2 of 12, so I'll have to go check it out.

gimp_homegurl April 17 2006, 20:08:03 UTC

Okay that was just beyond the cutest thing ever. Abrianna actually called John Dad!! I know you know because you wrote it but GAH! Eee! Makes me so happy!

Teyla falling asleep in his jacket was really sweet too. John obsessing over the kiss! Hee! I'm getting my UST and it's making me damned happy! I really love how they are slowly slipping into the family mold, it's just heart warming, almost makes you forget that the Wraith are back! And obviously congratulations are in order! Second place is not a bad place to be, nope not at all! *big grin* I'm happy for you! And so proud!

-Dani-

nytel April 17 2006, 21:37:26 UTC

You know what? I think you're actually the only person who mentioned the jacket thing, and it was one of my favorite parts. It's like completely irrelevant to the plot, but I thought it was cute.

But we musn't forget that the wraith are back. Damn wraith. Grr. Lol.

Thanks for the feedback. :)