Chapter 14

[nytel]

Title: The Night That Changed All Others
Chapter Title: Chapter 14 - Vigil
Author: Nytel
Rating: PG-13
Spoilers: Up to 203 for sure, but very light spoilers, if any, after that.
Summary: Teyla and John spend one night together, and they could never have imagined the series of events that would unfold because of it. These events would change the lives

Comments

Excellent

[anonymous]

I have just read all 14 chapters of this story. Amazing work. I love this story and cannot wait till the next installment. J/T all the way.

Re: Excellent

[nytel]

Wow, thank you so much. :)

I'm hoping to post the next part later today.

I'm glad that you're enjoying this, and thank you for leaving feedback. :)

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He looked down at her and spoke quickly. "You were having a dream, a dream about the wraith."

She scrunched up her face in confusion. "Yes...

"Teyla," he said, grabbing her shoulders. "You do remember the last time that you had nightmares about the wraith right?"

John knew the exact moment when Teyla realized what he was implying. "Yes," she sounded scared. "Do you think that there are wraith in the city now?"

*SPOILER ALERT!* Information mentioned above is now being deleted from memory... 5... 4... 3... 2... 1... 0 All is safe. *sighs* That's better... LOL! Okay! *claps hands rather gleefully* Lets get to the good stuff!

Dr. McKay looked at John like he had grown a second head. "You really don't know anything do you?"

"Hey!" John said resentfully.

"Listen," Rodney said. "I'm the genius, I'll figure it out. Now go away, you're distracting me." He immediately turned back to the computer screen and started to type again.LMAO! I love Mckay! You seriously, seriously do this man sooo much justice! I can actually hear his voice

[nytel]

Well, if I've made a shipper out of you my job is complete! *evil laugh* But how can you not love John/Teyla?

Umm... you didn't read that spoiler part I swear. Damn, I forgot it was in there or I would have warned you. Sorry. *sheepish grin*

I just love writing McKay. And you have no idea how happy I am that you can hear his voice when you read this. I can hear it in my head, but I'm not always sure that other people can too.

The hyper jump... I have a plan. You'll see. :) I'm glad I'm keeping you on edge with the wraith plot. Considering when I started I had no idea where it was going, that's a good thing. Thankfully now it's all planned out in my evil mind.

Thanks again for the feedback. :)

[sanssong]

Nice work- I'm still mystified by the whole Wraith/Children situation, John and Teyla cuddling is wonderful. One tiny nit.... The City's life sign detectors ARE able to tell if the person is Wraith or human. Humans show up blue- and Wraith show up red. It's the small hand helds that can't tell the difference. In The Seige I it was how they were able to tell where the Wraith were in the city. Otherwise, I'm really enjoying this. :-)

[nytel]

Darn it. I haven't watched it in so long that I forgot. Lol. Oh well, hopefully it didn't take away from the story too much. And I'm glad you're still liking it. :)