Chapter 16

[nytel]

Title: The Night That Changed All Others
Chapter Title: Chapter 16 - Tension Rising
Author: Nytel
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: John/Teyla
Genre: Romance, general
Main Characters: John and Teyla, but nearly everyone makes an appearance.
Spoilers: Up to 203.
Summary: Teyla and John spend one night together, and they could never have imagined the series of events

Comments

[adafrog]

oooh, the plot thickens...

[nytel]

Indeed it does. I just hope the next chapter will be satifactory.

Thanks for taking the time to leave feedback. It's good to know that at least some people are reading my stories. :)

[gimp_homegurl]

Mommy! It's over! *sobs*

I want more! lol That was so intense; the way Wier just rambled off orders and everyone darted around, how quickly they got to the Wraith ship, Beckett's caustion, the killing of the Wraith, Abrianna's warnings, John converging on the most important Wraith... It all happened so fast and so smoothly that it was just powerful.

And then we breath a sigh of relief because not only did Teyla stop John they now have the Wraith they need to free the kids and a Wraith ship that may just have the information they need on the rest of the Wraith who have come back.

I want more! Have I said I want more? Because I want more.

-Dani-

P.S. I want more!

[sanssong]

Getting more intense.... Though I'm a little confused as to why Teyla couldn't try to connect with either the children or the Wraith and block what he's doing to them.... Still enjoying though! :-)

[nytel]

Though I'm a little confused as to why Teyla couldn't try to connect with either the children or the Wraith and block what he's doing to them
-- Good point. I have no idea. Lol. We'll say that she's too distraught to think of it, or something like that.

But thankfully the whole mental connection thing gets discussed later on in detail. Chapter 19 maybe? Lol. I dont' remember.

Thanks for the feedback.