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Apr 21, 2006 19:43

Title: The Night That Changed All Others
Chapter Title: Chapter 17 - Emotions Run High
Author: Nytel
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: John/Teyla
Genre: Romance, general
Main Characters: John and Teyla, but nearly everyone makes an appearance.
Spoilers: Up to 203.
Summary: Teyla and John spend one night together, and they could never have imagined the series of ( Read more... )

tntcao, john/teyla, atlantis, atlantis fic, fan fic

Comments 6

adafrog April 22 2006, 03:57:53 UTC

Yay socks! lol
Love that they're making up.

nytel April 22 2006, 06:08:24 UTC

I'm glad that you like it. :)

Thank you for taking the time to leave feedback, it totally makes my day. :)

gimp_homegurl April 22 2006, 16:32:21 UTC

It was too late; he had already pulled the trigger. Thankfully however, his reaction time was swift and he managed to lower his P-90 so that the bullet entered into the wraith's foot instead of his chest.This sentence alone tore me down and then lifted me right back up again! Can you say roller coaster?! lol ( ... )

nytel April 22 2006, 22:36:40 UTC

This sentence alone tore me down and then lifted me right back up again! Can you say roller coaster?!
-- I'm glad it had that effect. :)

I think that moment was the first time I actually 'heard' his voice in my head.
-- Yeah! I'm really happy that you can hear him now. And it does cement the fact that the old John is back. And yeah, it wasn't really intended, but I'm glad it happened like that.

John carrying Teyla back to quarters was adorable.
--Thanks. I tried to make it as different as possible from the scene in "When You're Sick"

Those mundane actions really add to a stories realism, makes you feel like it's really happening before your eyes.
-- I'm so glad you said that, because it's exactly what I was going for.

He really does love her, really wants things to work out and you portrayed that beautifully.
--Yes, he does. They really need to understand that.

Course then you go and tease me with that ending!-- Lol, yeah. But I can guarantee you that this story will go no higher than PG-13. It started out that way and it's so ( ... )

sanssong June 5 2006, 17:24:58 UTC

Good chapter. You're doing a nice job of moving their relationship along and making it more than just the physical aspect of it.

nytel June 5 2006, 17:30:29 UTC

Thank you so much. :D And I was really trying to stress that so I'm glad it came across that way. I think that this chapter is where it all started to come together. :)

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