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The Night That Changed All Others - Chapter 1

Jan 04, 2006 18:09

Story Title: The Night That Changed All Others
Chapter Title: Chapter 1 - Reminiscing
Author: Nytel
Spoilers: Up to 203 for sure, but very light spoilers, if any, after that.
Summary: John and Teyla spend one night together, but that night has consequences that neither of them could have imagined. Read to see how they deal with the changes in their ( Read more... )

tntcao, john/teyla, atlantis, atlantis fic, fan fic

Comments 7

paranoidangel42 January 5 2006, 18:22:20 UTC

I came here from Sheppard/Teyla. I like long angsty fic, so I quite liked this one. You haven't managed to convince me of the whole twins idea yet (I've read too much badfic over the years) but I'm interested to see where this goes.

nytel January 5 2006, 22:52:12 UTC

Well I'm glad that you're giving the twins a chance. They will play a major role in the upcoming story and will be the source of a few plot twists. :)

Thanks for reading.

sanssong January 5 2006, 20:37:47 UTC

Engaging story so far. I look forward to the next chapter! And if you're old enough I'd invite you to join Sheppard/Teyla Fever and post this story there as well. You'll find the link on the LJ's homepage.

Suzanne
STF Moderator

nytel January 5 2006, 22:55:33 UTC

Thanks for the invitation, but nope not old enough, though I wish I was. Fortunately though I turn 18 in February so I'll join and post then.

Thanks for the lovely feedback. :)

sanssong January 6 2006, 16:36:45 UTC

Great I'll look forward to it!

gimp_homegurl April 16 2006, 21:24:46 UTC

Can I have permission to hit John? The meanie! Okay so it was gut reaction and I can understand that. Also I may have to ask permission to hit Teyla too. Running away with his kids is just as mean if not meaner. That having been said I totally get why she did it. John gave her no reason to think he'd want her or the baby/babies. (Twins! Hee! So cute!)

This is what happens when people don't communicate people! Life lesson learned... Will I heed by it? No! Because like John and Teyla I am ruled by my gut and my gut is mentally deficient. (It's my gut! Not my brain! lol)

Great chapter! And I'm off to the next!

-Dani-

nytel April 16 2006, 21:38:48 UTC

Oh, I'm glad that you liked that. Now, was it what you were expecting?

Oh yeah, go ahead and hit John. But Teyla... she might hit back. Lol.

And I'm so glad that you understand their motivations for doing what they did. Now you shall just have to see if they can make things better. :)