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[nytel]

Story Title: The Night That Changed All Others
Chapter Title: Chapter 2 - A Deep Cold
Author: Nytel
Spoilers: Up to 203 for sure, but very light spoilers, if any, after that.
Summary: Teyla and John spend one night together, and they could never have imagined the series of events that would unfold because of it. These events would change the lives and

Comments

[paranoidangel42]

Arg, you can't stop there! I quite liked the names of the twins. I spotted a typo though at the beginning of this sentence:

A not much later she heard “Abrianna get off me!” Tagan was awake.

[nytel]

I know, it's such a horrible place to stop. Lol. I love cliffies. :) And I'm glad you liked the names of the twins. Do you know where Tagan's name comes from? If you do I'll be surprised.

And sorry about that typo, I have a beta but we both must have missed it.

[paranoidangel42]

Do you know where Tagan's name comes from?

Only because I read the comment below! Otherwise I had no idea at all.

[sanssong]

This was an evil place to end! I hope you'll update soon, I'm really enjoying it. And I know where Tagan is from! That was her father's name. :-)

[gimp_homegurl]

Damn! I had a mental bet going with myself that John would show up on the planet she was on! I sooo didn't see this coming! And now I owe myself twenty! I was really worried for a moment there that Abrianna was going to get swept up, like really scared for her because she was behind Teyla... Thank goodness they made it! I hope Abrianna's okay. Hanzila... Godzilla... LOL! Coincedence? I think not! Well, maybe. lol

Now we get to the gritty part, Teyla is going to have to explain Tagan and Abrianna. Though she could put it off but once John does the math... Ooooo *rubs hands together gleefully*

Another great chapter, the race had my heart going!

-Dani-

[nytel]

I'm glad that I could get you caught up in the story. I'm also glad that you didn't see that coming. I love putting twists like that into my stories, I'd be expecting a few more if I were you. :)

As for Hanzila, lmfao, I totally didn't mean that in reference to Godzilla, but it works. I just needed a name so I picked one from a stupid name website.

And as we will see again, John can be dense. :)

[gimp_homegurl]

I'm glad that I could get you caught up in the story. I'm also glad that you didn't see that coming. I love putting twists like that into my stories, I'd be expecting a few more if I were you. :)

Knowing myself I will be paying that twenty out in pounds of flesh but it was well worth it. I like plot twists too they make for good reading and do get the readers into the story, which you have so totally managed to do with me!

As for Hanzila, lmfao, I totally didn't mean that in reference to Godzilla, but it works. I just needed a name so I picked one from a stupid name website.

LOL! The name reminded me of an old eighth grade teach I had we all called Bodzila because she was a monster. Hanzila - Bodzila - Godzilla. lol

And as we will see again, John can be dense. :)

GAH! No! Shoosh! I'm reading Kara Thrace Doesn't Cry right now so no spoiling me with tidbits about John being dense! Evil! For shame! Hee!

-Dani-

[nytel]

Oh no, the whole story is ruined! Lol. But it's John, come on. :)