Then There Were Two (4/?)

[nytel]

Title: Then There Were Two (4/?)
Author: Nytel
Rating: R
Pairing: John/Teyla
Main Characters: John, Teyla
Genre: Angst/Romance
Summary: The need to find some kind of comfort during a dire war is strong. It is important to build strong bonds with family and friends, but even that my backfire.
Warnings: Sex, Character Death
Spoilers: Up to Phantoms. NOTE:

Comments

[carpenyx]

I think this turned out wonderfully! I really love it. :)

The description of the wolves is great! Quite disturbing picturing them but it's awesome. :) (I'm actually picturing very skinny creatures like in that SG-1 episode with the mutated creature this past season, lol - they disturbed me. :P)

Rodney turned and looked at her with an almost fearful look in his eyes. “Sheppard’s going to kill me!”

*giggles* I love Rodney freaking out. hehe

“Calm down Elizabeth,” was John’s soothing reply. “I told you we brought a surprise.”

Darn cliffhangers!!! I wanna know what the surprise is!!! :P

[nytel]

I think this turned out wonderfully! I really love it.
--*g* Thank you.

I'm actually picturing very skinny creatures like in that SG-1 episode with the mutated creature this past season, lol - they disturbed me
-- Me too! Lol. It was what I was kind of basing them on.

*giggles* I love Rodney freaking out.
-- I know, Rodney is the best. :D

Darn cliffhangers!!! I wanna know what the surprise is!!!
--Lol. It's pretty logical so you should be able to figure it out if you think about it...

[jeyla4ever]

*claps madly*
oh, I'm so anxious to read the rest, NYT..hurry it up!

[nytel]

Thank you. :)

I can't hurry up though. I'm swamped with homework and I write as fast as I can to begin with.

[nath_42]

Now I want to know what is that damn surprise !

[nytel]

Lol. You will definitely find out in the next chapter. :)

[nicole9514]

Kick ass girl. This is one of my fav fics by you. I love how detailed it was..and yeah john's back :))

[nytel]

*grins* Thank you. It's actually one of my favorites too. :D

And yay for John!

[anonymous]

Have I mentioned that I hate cliffhangers! You're writing such a fantastic story and each time I read a chapter I'm left needing to read more! Please update ASAP!
:) Sarah-Jayne

[nytel]

Lol. I hate reading them, but I love writing them. ;)

You're writing such a fantastic story and each time I read a chapter I'm left needing to read more!
--*grins* Thank you, I'm so glad to hear that.

I'm hoping to start working on the next chapter soon.