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Then There Were Two (5/?)

Oct 16, 2006 17:48

Title: Then There Were Two (5/?)
Author: Nytel
Rating: R
Pairing: John/Teyla
Main Characters: John, Teyla
Genre: Angst/Romance
Summary: The need to find some kind of comfort during a dire war is strong. It is important to build strong bonds with family and friends, but even that my backfire.
Warnings: Sex, Character Death
Spoilers: Up to Phantoms.
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john/teyla, ttwt, atlantis, atlantis fic, fan fic

Comments 12

jeyla4ever October 17 2006, 00:23:15 UTC

OH, they are finally back together...LOVE IT!

Oh, and he's letting her keep his dog tags....

WONDERFUL HON!

nytel October 21 2006, 02:48:03 UTC

*grins* Thanks, that means a lot.

And yes, he's letting her keep his dog tag. :D

I'm so glad you liked it.

nicole9514 October 17 2006, 03:14:34 UTC

Yeah for John's return :)) lovely chappy :))

great fic hun

nytel October 21 2006, 02:48:19 UTC

Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. :D

anonymous October 17 2006, 04:16:13 UTC

John's back YAY!!!! More John and Teyla YAY!!! I know I say it almost every time but this story is REALLY getting better and better! However, I have but one complaint... why did you have to finish that chapter before you gave us a detailed description of very hot, will send your temperature rising, completely naked John Sheppard! LOL!
You really are writing a great story nytel and I can't wait for more!
Sarah-Jayne :)

(p.s I understand completely, my life is crazy as well with so much to complete before I graduate from University at the end of next month! Good luck with your midterms!)

nytel October 21 2006, 02:50:28 UTC

That he is! *g*

I know I say it almost every time but this story is REALLY getting better and better!
--I'm blushing, thank you so much.

why did you have to finish that chapter before you gave us a detailed description of very hot, will send your temperature rising, completely naked John Sheppard!
--Lol. I was tempted, but I didn't think the scene needed it. I might include flashbacks in the next chapter, but it's doubtful.

You really are writing a great story nytel and I can't wait for more!
--Thank you, that's very inspiring. :)

p.s I understand completely, my life is crazy as well with so much to complete before I graduate from University at the end of next month! Good luck with your midterms!
--Thanks, I knew most people would. Good luck with everything, and congratulations!

nath_42 October 19 2006, 16:21:42 UTC

Hi, don't worry for the delay. I know so well what you mean.
The return of John... this is great. I was longing too lol. And I love Rodney's face going white (John would have hit him if he could have !)

nytel October 21 2006, 02:51:55 UTC

Thanks, I know that the majority of people are really understanding, and it really puts less pressure on me.

Lol. I was longing as well. Originally I hadn't intended for there to be that many chapters without him!

I love Rodney's face going white (John would have hit him if he could have !)
--Oh yes, John is very protective. ;)

Thanks for the feedback!

carpenyx October 24 2006, 15:36:59 UTC

I really loved this chapter. The imagery of John's expressions regarding the Nikephorous was too cute and funny. :) I also loved when John offered Teyla his jacket!

The bantering about Rodney shooting Teyla and the whole John shooting him and Ronon was funny.

And the ending with John telling Teyla to keep his dog tag was sweet. I really loved this! You did a wonderful job. :)

nytel October 24 2006, 18:53:10 UTC

Thanks! *g*

The imagery of John's expressions regarding the Nikephorous was too cute and funny
--Yay! I'm glad you could *see* it. :D

I also loved when John offered Teyla his jacket!
--I thought it was kind of cute. :) Plus I needed a way for him to suddenly notice her arm. ;)

The bantering about Rodney shooting Teyla and the whole John shooting him and Ronon was funny.
--Thanks! And you know that Ronon was just dying to see John when he found out. Lol.

And the ending with John telling Teyla to keep his dog tag was sweet.
--Thanks. I wasn't originally planning on going this way, but I hope it works in the end.

Thanks for the feedback!

carpenyx October 24 2006, 20:26:47 UTC

Thanks! And you know that Ronon was just dying to see John when he found out. Lol.

I loved it! It was like a little puppy... or bulldog? waiting for his master to return home! Hee! K, maybe not to that degree... buuut. :P

Thanks. I wasn't originally planning on going this way, but I hope it works in the end.

I liked it, very much. So, I'm glad you went that way... but now I'm curious... about 'I hope it works in the end'? heheh

Thanks for the feedback!

anytime, hun! i try, even though I get horribly behind. :P hehe

nytel October 24 2006, 20:34:49 UTC

I loved it! It was like a little puppy... or bulldog? waiting for his master to return home! Hee! K, maybe not to that degree... buuut.
--Lol. You are totally right. :D

but now I'm curious... about 'I hope it works in the end'? heheh
--There's just one scene in the chapter after the next that I had planned on building around the fact that John was with Teyla, but not willing to show it to everyone else. But I think I can do the same thing but focus it on something else. (I'm not sure if that even made any sense. Lol.)