Then There Were Two (8/8)

Dec 23, 2006 11:06


Title: Then There Were Two (8/8)
Author: Nytel
Rating: R
Pairing: John/Teyla
Main Characters: John, Teyla
Genre: Angst/Romance
Summary: The need to find some kind of comfort during a dire war is strong. It is important to build strong bonds with family and friends, but even that may backfire.
Warnings: Sex, Character Death
Spoilers: Up to Phantoms.
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john/teyla, ttwt, atlantis, atlantis fic, fan fic

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nicole9514 December 24 2006, 02:13:41 UTC
**Hugs**

great story hun. I really enjoyed it :))

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nytel December 24 2006, 23:46:17 UTC
Thank you! *hugs* And thanks for reading. :D

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nath_42 December 25 2006, 19:10:54 UTC
you write very well. It's sad though

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nytel December 29 2006, 07:23:55 UTC
Thank you. And yes, it is sad, but intentionally anyway.

Thanks for reading. :)

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carpenyx December 29 2006, 19:49:36 UTC
Eek! Sorry I didn't comment on this sooner! :P

I have enjoyed this story from the beginning and you totally delivered with the action, suspense (those evil cliffhangers! :P) and the romance between John and Teyla.

The last two chapters were so emotionally packed! I would often tear up and (I admit) cried a little. You did a wonderful job with the visual imagery with your words, I could actually see it. I think this last installment was beautifully done. :)

You did a wonderful job! Thank you very much for sharing this with us. :)

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nytel December 29 2006, 20:19:53 UTC
Eek! Sorry I didn't comment on this sooner!
--Oh, don't worry about it. I just feel super bad because I haven't commented on the last who knows how many chapters of DEM.

I have enjoyed this story from the beginning and you totally delivered with the action, suspense (those evil cliffhangers! :P) and the romance between John and Teyla.
--Thank you. I'm glad that all of that came through okay. :) And yes, my cliffies. They're addicting really. Lol.

The last two chapters were so emotionally packed! I would often tear up and (I admit) cried a little. You did a wonderful job with the visual imagery with your words, I could actually see it. I think this last installment was beautifully done.
--Well, if I made you cry then I'm happy. Not because I'm mean, but because it means I got the emotions across. :) This is actually my favorite J/T (that I've written anyway). I'm quite proud of it.

Thank you for reading, and for your continued help. *hugs*

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carpenyx December 29 2006, 20:28:23 UTC
Oh, don't worry about it. I just feel super bad because I haven't commented on the last who knows how many chapters of DEM.

I know you've been busy, it's all good. :)

Thank you. I'm glad that all of that came through okay. :) And yes, my cliffies. They're addicting really. Lol.

I can tell, lol.

Well, if I made you cry then I'm happy. Not because I'm mean, but because it means I got the emotions across. :) This is actually my favorite J/T (that I've written anyway). I'm quite proud of it.

You did just that. :) I think this is my favorite J/T fic of yours, I also loved "The Truth About Pollen" though, that's up there on my fave list. :)

You are very welcome! *hugs back*

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smcki10 May 19 2009, 04:41:03 UTC
I love all your BSG/Lee and Kara stuff so i was super exicted when i seen you worte SGA/Sheyla! This story was awesome! It was sad that Ronon and Rodney died but i think you worte all the charatchers really well!

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