Starless Nights

May 13, 2006 01:03


bruises, tears
     cloudy days
heartaches, fears
     starless nights
lies, deceit
     selfish ways
emptiness, defeat
     countless fights

feelings ignored
     fading slowly
love implored
     believing wrong
tables turned
     crying endlessly
Dreams burned
     holding on

-AMB

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anonymous May 14 2006, 03:51:56 UTC
This is written very well. I can feel the hurt and emotion behind it - something I'm familiar with and can certainly relate to. You write so very well, but I hate that your inspiration comes from hurt. Maybe things will get better so that you can have new inspiration to write. :-)

-Buddy

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o0o_bubbles_o0o May 14 2006, 04:43:24 UTC
Thank you... I hope so too.

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