As One

[o2binla]

Title: As One
Description: Canon one-shot at the Siesta, m/m sex. Inspired by the "Ennis bottoms for the first time" prompt from transcendenza's ficathon -- yes I know it was back in July. I started it then but only just untangled it to my satisfaction ;-) And yeah I suspect the last few lines give away my gender as female, b/c I'm not sure men

Comments

[haunted_by_bbm]

Love it! One of my favorite moments...the Siesta. ;) Thank you. :)

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[o2binla]

Hi haunted,
I'm so glad you liked it! Thank you for reading :-) Lisa

[bbm_citygirl]

Really lovely. There is a sweetness and innocence and the words flowed beautifully. Very nicely done. Thank you for sharing it.

[o2binla]

I'm glad that you liked it! L.

Lo que fue y lo que no fue y pudo haber sido

[carmenmariabs]

Este momento fue en realidad el inicio de su relación como pareja,...no el inicio del amor pero sí el principio de una unión llena de sufrimiento, llena de separaciones, llena de ansiedad por verse otra vez, llena de dolor por estar tampoco tiempo juntos, llena de angustia, llena de preguntas en ausencia del otro:¿que hago yo aqui con mi esposa?, ¿es este mi hogar?, ...y la respuesta la saben ellos perfectamente, "quiero estar a kilometros de aqui, yo, yo, ... yo solo quiero estar contigo."
Aqui empezo la cobardia de Ennis, aqui empezo Jack a consentirsela. No ganaron ningúna batalla.
Estupenda esta escena, muy bien escrita y descrita, preciosa, excitante llena de amor, pero..............,lastima, no pudo ser una vida dulce juntos.
Carmen
P.D.:¿Qué son 20 años?, Nada, a razón de 3 semanas al año nada, poquisimo.

Re: Lo que fue y lo que no fue y pudo haber sido

[o2binla]

Hi Carmen,
I'm hoping someone will translate your message for me, as my Spanish is not good :-) -- but I think you are you found my piece realistic, which makes me happy to hear! Thank you for reading! L.

[sienata]

That was so perfect!! I loved it... so hot and sexy but full of their emotions too - never enough of either for me. Thanks for letting Jack bring lube. That makes is so much better for me (and them too, I'm sure!)Write some more soon please. Hugs.... S!

[o2binla]

Glad you liked it Sienna! It was important to me to work the lube in there... I couldn't see how a cheap 1967 motel room would have anything remotely suitable, but then I thought, wouldn't ever-hopeful Jack maybe think to bring something with him? and decided that was plausible. I too find it makes me feel much better about the whole thing ;-) L.

as one

[bijou16]

ho o2binla,
that was beautiful. i loved it and i am so glad ennis wanted and needed jack inside him. like jack said they knew this was it for both of them even if they never verbalized it.
just wonderful,
teresa

Re: as one

[o2binla]

Hi Teresa,
Glad you liked it. When I thought about it I figured the Siesta was the point where E might have felt a compulsion to bring things full circle, even if he'd never be able to articulate it in words. Thanks for reading, Lisa