bubbling we

[o_eyeless_me]

fragile tendrils weave tender memories
of unsleeping her--
how we stirred the bedposts!

Comments

[capedmysterio]

you're out there, man

[o_eyeless_me]

excuse me?

[drezdyn]

yeah the subjects are a bit bizare but that is what makes poetry fresh and new. Very nice use of language though your subjects do focus around sex and blood a bit much for the casual reader.