Anothe part of mah final....

[o_ubiquitous_o]

Here's the short story I'm most likely going to use. It's very rough though.

The amount of metal in this city astounds me. I've never really noticed it before today; now that I had, it chokes me. Gagging silently I walk swiftly down the street, gripping the briefcase in my hand tightly while simultaneously loosening my tie. The day is gray and

Comments

[rosehiptea]

I like it. It's very shocking, and it definitely kept me reading.

[o_ubiquitous_o]

Thank you very much!

The format got a bit muddled, but I'm happy with it.

THank you for helping me! :*