Spell My Name With an 'E'

[oatrevolution]

Title: Spell My Name With an 'E'
Prompt: Written for the belated Valentines' Day athon thing at what_the_fruk.  The original prompt was "35. Anything concerning the joint development of Concorde airplanes.  Smut is optional but very welcomed."  Which is good, because this... ended up being mostly smut.
Summary: England thinks that Concorde is a stupid (French)

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Happiest OP

[lost_hitsu]

I mainly added the prompt because the thought of those two creating something so fancy together caught my attention and I was curious if somebody would be able to make a story out of that, but I think I secretly hoped the author would use the E problem as the main plot idea all along. I admit I didn't have many expectations regarding this prompt, and I'm all the more surprised at what excellent fic it inspired.

I adore the way you make smut happen, both as writer where I admire the technique and the way you put together words (because damn, smut isn't easy to write), and as reader that is simply overwhelmed by the impact of the story. The way you combine detailed descriptions that never run into too poetic and metaphorical spheres yet aren't disgustingly overdone, with plot and emotions and inner talk of characters makes for the perfect mix that made me really read with battered breath and can't-look-away sort of enchantment.

I had various favourite moments but this The buttons at the top of his cream shirt had been undone, of

Re: Happiest OP

[oatrevolution]

OH MY GOD IT WAS YOU ALL ALONG excuse me while I try not to scream in a quiet area

[berseker]

Omg this was so HOT and fun and hilarious XD I loved it!

[oatrevolution]

Oooh thank you very much~ XD I'm so glad you enjoyed it! Really makes me a very happy girl!

[shadow_of_egypt]

Starting an argument halfway into sex and past the point of no return is underhanded and just plain sneaky. XD Mental capabalities are at an all time low and then suddenly there's charming romantic French bullshit, and it's so very hard to say no to someone who's just blown your brains out with a very good orgasm. Your France really does have an impeccable sense of timing.

Thoroughly loved this (good smut was good =w=;;;), and you have a gorgeous way of describing people and their actions. England's mental wanderings and complaints were amusing (and his self-esteem issues inspired the urge to hug him), and God, your France. No end to the love.

[oatrevolution]

Ahaha yeah I figured France would be the sort to use underhanded tactics to get what he wants. And England was just all "UGH I'M GOING TO FALL FOR IT AGAIN." XD As soon as I heard the excuses for why the 'e' should be there, it was just so France that I couldn't help but add it. He used sap and sex and got what he wanted, so he is in no way discouraged from trying it again.

Thank you for thinking the smut was good! It felt really awkward when I was writing it (though I did like seven pages in one day, so that may have had something to do with it). England always turns out like that when I give him free reign, the goof. France sends you a kiss~ he says of course you would love him, he is perfect in all ways. XD

Anyway, I was so thrilled to see your kind comment! :3 They keep me happy and make my day! So thank you very much for taking the time to sit down and tell me what you thought.

[oatrevolution]

I will write ALL THE CHEESY fff yeah this one in particular was kind of cliched but I had fun writing it anyway!

*blushes* You're so sweet! I love your comments (AND THAT ICON) and I'm so happy that you liked this! Here, have some hearts: <3 <3

[aoi_aka]

Some time ago I was watching one of those educational channels like Discovery or Smithsonian and the show was about the Smithsonian Air and Space Whatchamacallit. They mentioned the Concorde and how it was a joint FrUK endeavor. I thought to myself, somebody needs to write that!

You wrote it beautifully. When France started to talk about the E, it dawned on me why he insisted so much and my little FrUK heart danced for joy and my eyes misted a little. This was so beautiful, my eyes are tearing up again just thinking of your fic. Actually, my face hurts from grinning like an idiot. I thought the airplane a beauty. There was no way then or now that I'd be able to afford a ride in it. I was sad to see it go and this was before I was even a Hetalia or FrUK fan.

The Magic Scone to ward off the Red Scare is hilarious. The way you described pr0n leaves me jealous. I can't write like that. Thank you for sharing this.