This was good! You were lacking several commas in the giant paragraphs in the beginning, but other than that there were no huge grammatical errors that I caught.
Kyuhyun is an interesting character! And Sungmin is too, and Ryeowook is just adorable X3 I like the storyline! It's pretty unique, and I look forward to you next chapter
hehehe yeah .... never proof read or check my grammatical errors ... i am horrible about that and my dongsaeng is always nagging me about it ... aha usually she checks my work but she has been really busy lol so shi didn't get to yet lol
yes ma'am!!! hehehe i will try to correct my errors ... but .. well idk lol i fall asleep when i reread my work cause i already know what is going to happen ... i know bad habit lol :P but i am glad you liked it!! i am almost done with 2 ^^
*squeals and glomps* OMO!!! thanks so much for reading and commenting!! ^^ <3 I am sooo happy you find it interesting!! i was worried people might think it was boring >< hehehe and i am currently working on the update ... hehe i had to take a break though cause some things were happening and i was worried i might do something horrible to one of them due to my bad mood lol :P
And yay!! you really like the minwook bffery??? *giggles* so happy i think they are so freaking cute!! ^^
omg!! *squeals* really???? Thank you so much!! this just made my day!! *glomps* so happy you like it!!! :D i was so worried ppl would find it boring!! hehe i am working on the update now!! i hope it might be posted .. um tomorrow? O.o lol but idk ^^ Thank you so much for reading!!
hehehe um i can try to update tomorrow lol but no promises lol i have had a really hectic week lol :P but hmmm i will def try though!! :D hehe and thank you so much!!! :D that makes me really happy!!1
*sighs* sorry i lied about the posting date ... the problems in my life just got worse so i was preoccupied. .... but writing helps so i hope to update soon ... please please wait for me ... *puppy face*
So far, the story plot's rather interesting. Have a fun and enjoyable time experimenting with your linguistic skills and story line! We'll be here to help comment and give our opinions =) all the best!
thank you!!! *smiles broadly* i am so glad that you read this! Actually i have chapter 2 up and i am currently writing 3 llol just in case you are interested
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Kyuhyun is an interesting character! And Sungmin is too, and Ryeowook is just adorable X3 I like the storyline! It's pretty unique, and I look forward to you next chapter
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Clear characterization and I like the plot~
A lot~
Update soon~~
THE MINWOOK BFFERY. SO FLIPPING CUTE. OMG.
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And yay!! you really like the minwook bffery??? *giggles* so happy i think they are so freaking cute!! ^^
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the polt is amazing
I really want to read more
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Oh, I enjoy this so much :3
It's really interesting, please keep it up! :D
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But don't stress yourself too much ;)
Oh, you made me happy with this promising fic :D
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So far, the story plot's rather interesting. Have a fun and enjoyable time experimenting with your linguistic skills and story line! We'll be here to help comment and give our opinions =) all the best!
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