Comments | obliviousme1536: A World Awakened -Chapter 1-Part 2

obliviousme1536

A World Awakened -Chapter 1-Part 2

Nov 19, 2012 23:12

A/n: So... What do you think? *shifts nervously* Please comment!! ^_^

super junior, donghae, eunhae. eunhyuk, mystical

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do_nx November 20 2012, 18:48:04 UTC

WOAH
the last line was the bomb!
Teukie brings Hae to kill Hyuk?! And this seems chapter-ed fic, right?
Well totally looking forward to how Teukie explains this and I wonder what Teuk is.
This is SO good, I'm hooked and hungry for more

Hungry

hehe, I'm going to keep stalkin' then :)

obliviousme1536 November 21 2012, 06:16:21 UTC

*giggles* So you liked it?? It wasn't like... a disappointment? O.o and yeah a few chapters lol .. my mind kinda ran with it T.T

do_nx November 21 2012, 06:31:17 UTC

No no not at all disappointed in fact you added more to the idea which is good, if I'm correct both Hyuk and Hae are half-blooded vamps right? Hae must be special if Hyuk think's Hae can kill him but then again Hae can't see Hyuk's original form ( or am I confusing this?)

But seriously this is VERY good, I'm craving for more and more, how many chapters do you think this will go? :D
<3

obliviousme1536 November 21 2012, 07:06:42 UTC

*squeals in delight* thank goodness!! I was worried you would look at it and be like ... wtf??? but ... well normal vamp fic isn'tfor me lol but yes, yes they are since you asked for them to be and ooooh~ Yes!! *high five* you have it right on!!! ... *giggles* beacause i am mean i will make you guess!! ^_^ hehe... what do you think is hae's other half and what do you think Teuk is?? O.o *giggles evilly* and yay!!! *squeals happily* ... my stories are an addiction!!! *evil laugh* ... jkjk that was a horrible pun~

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lovstar12 November 21 2012, 04:17:20 UTC

oh~ this is good! I want to know more about everyone's ability. Please update soon^^

obliviousme1536 November 21 2012, 06:13:13 UTC

*giggles* I am glad you like it and somebody read it!! *beams* I will work very hard~

pinkapple04 November 21 2012, 16:54:23 UTC

when are you updating again? THis is sooooo good!
The last line can leads to many events. and Donghae to kill Eunhyuk? I think Donghae will kill himself 1st.
I believe everything has both sides.....so if the initial plan is really to retain Eunhyuk, Donghae will make sure to save Eunhyuk and to stick with him and protect him.

sciyhtere November 22 2012, 05:43:42 UTC

wow this story nice!! diff from any vampire type story i read!! i love iT! cant waiit for the update im very curious right now~~~

speceffectz November 22 2012, 05:59:38 UTC

omg i REALLY like this so far <3