more poetry!

Aug 14, 2007 15:25

sweet whispers of wind
caresses yon cheek

weary mind lighten thy load
as silver dew drops
fall upon closed eyes

as mine crimson velvet softly brushes
thine petaled pursed lips
breathing e'er gently

i'll embrace thee
and chase away all demons

until the golden rays glow
kissing upon thy perfect haloed form
once more

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jam1974 August 14 2007, 20:23:11 UTC
Very pretty! I like it muchly!

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obscurredstar August 14 2007, 22:25:13 UTC
well thankies! ummmmm who is this? i see you have a lot of similar friends.. so i'm sure i should know you. .but who are you??? :) sorry!! i can't figure it out by the southpark picture... doh!
tay

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hyperrock September 18 2007, 22:02:32 UTC
Wow... That's beautiful! The English and the choice of words and everything. Well done you :)

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obscurredstar September 20 2007, 03:05:08 UTC
well thank you prettiness!!! i loveeee poetry! i've been writing forever. i love to try to create such vivid imagery for the reader. :)

if you look in my memories under poetry i have quite a few up... some are erotic, some are love, some are angsty... etc. enjoy them all. critique is always welcome.

snuggles and kisses!!!
tay

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