Gravity Doesn't Hold Me Like You Do

May 14, 2013 16:55

Title: Gravity Doesn't Hold Me Like You Do
Rating: PG
Paring: Yuto x Yamada
Genre: Romance
Summary: Yuto and Yamada have a specific love story. (This is the gist of it.)
Notes: Whoaa it's been a year? This fic (which was inspired by the song Ho Hey) is a laate birthday gift for nightbaron079. Also, thanks to the lovely re-riko for beta-ing this fic.

I belong with you / You belong with me / You're my sweet(heart) )

fanfiction, rating: pg, title: gravity doesn't hold me like you , yamajima

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goodbyelover May 14 2013, 14:05:48 UTC
WOW, this was a super fantastic, bittersweet awesome read (also the first HSJ fic to hold my attention in what feels like ages. x: )BUT I REALLY LIKED THIS, it was sad, yeah, but it was mostly just amazingly sweet and really touching, and UGH YAMAJIMAAAAA /o\ *rolls*

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obsessed_makpa May 14 2013, 14:39:36 UTC
THANK YOUUUUU. :DDDD I was having a meh night but your comment is so sweeet. ♥ It's an honor to be "super fantastic bittersweet awesome". :)))

I'M HAPPY YOU REALLY LIKED IT /rolls with you

Thank you again for reading!!! :')

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goodbyelover May 14 2013, 14:48:02 UTC
Yamajima always has a special spot for me <3

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obsessed_makpa May 15 2013, 10:37:05 UTC
The same goes for me, darling. :)

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yatsuiko_chan May 14 2013, 16:20:28 UTC
This is so pretty ;///;
Yamada and Yuto were just so... real

No amount of whispers could ring louder than the fact that they were in love.
quoting just because asnsfklsf so pretty

The breakup was so painful ;n; “I met someone.” I literally wanted to punch Yamada when he said this *o* but I love how Yuto's first reaction was relief and wanting Yamada to be happy. It sounds just like him to be so selfless like that <333

(Yuto will always be his favorite color.)
This is my favorite line omg ;u;

You wrote their love story really well and I love how it encompassed everything they went together (and that it has a happy ending yaaaay)

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obsessed_makpa May 15 2013, 10:45:33 UTC
HAHA PRETTY idk how to write any other way. it sounds pretentious sometimes but oh well yay pretty thaaaanks

UGH SENPAII YOU'RE ALWAYS SO NICE AND SUPPORTIVE your comments just :DDDD ♥♥♥

thank goodness it's realistic i kept rethinking who would react like this and that. :)) AND OMG SHH THAT COLOR LINE IS MY FAVE TOO :'D

HAHA i can't end it in angst. never. i would die. HAPPY ENDINGS ALWAYS FOREVER !!!!

Thank you so so much again for reading! :)

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obsessed_makpa May 16 2013, 12:41:31 UTC
Thank you so much (for the love). Hahaha. :'D ♥

I was afraid it wouldn't be clear. ^^''''''

Thank you for reading! :D

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aysira May 19 2013, 13:06:09 UTC
Beautiful.Absolutely beautiful and fantastic fanfiction.Everything just felt....so real.Thank you for writing this,dear author.You just made my day :)

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obsessed_makpa May 20 2013, 13:07:55 UTC
Thank you sooooo much. :') ♥ When I read this comment yesterday, it made my day too. ;u; I feel so touched when people describe my things as beautiful. :))))

Also, can I add you? :)

Thank youu for reading this!! :DD

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aysira May 20 2013, 15:43:06 UTC
I've added you! :)

gonna go read your fanfiction again :D teehee

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mizerablyme May 20 2013, 12:24:58 UTC
It was never an issue of gender. Yuto looked at Yamada like an astronomer would look at the skies. Yamada was his universe- beautiful, mysterious, and overwhelming. No amount of whispers could ring louder than the fact that they were in love.

this part ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

the fic's just so sweet and perfect and beautiful and everything else in between. :D

...idk, but I think I'd believe this is their love story irl XD

thank you for writing~ ^_^

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obsessed_makpa May 20 2013, 13:20:08 UTC
THANK YOUUUU ♥♥♥♥♥♥

Your comment is just awwwww. ♥ Just thank you for the adjectives. ;w;

Hahaha I'd like to think it's the real story too. :))) You never know. ;))

Thanks again for reading. :D

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