What Happens In Vegas... (Part 4)

[obsession_inc]

Title: What happens in Vegas... (Part 4)
Characters: Tony Stark, Pepper Potts
Word Count: aprox. 4500
Rating: PG-13
Spoilers: none, assuming you've seen the movie
Author's Notes: Part 4 of the Accidental Vegas Wedding Crackfic that was supposed to be a round-robin, but after I did two parts in a row (a long, long time ago in, uh... 2008?), the

Comments

[skye3]

just read from the start and i loved it. poor pepper for having to deal with everything alone. i wonder if tony just faking not remembering...lol!

hope you update soon!

[obsession_inc]

Thanks!

[bonnie8jo]

This is fantastic and I am so glad that you are continuing this. The funny thing is that I remembered this fic the other day and was very sad that it was unfinished and lo and behold, here it is.

Pepper's mindset during this is very interesting and I can't wait to find out what is going on in Tony's head. I am impressed that a man as familiar with binge drinking as Tony, passed out. I can't wait for the next chapter to learn more.

[obsession_inc]

Thanks! Logic is a funny thing in crackfic; it only applies emotionally, and not so much on other things.

[commodoremarie]

Thank you for picking up the reins and taking charge - seems like round robins have a habit of either becoming someone's baby or just getting left behind. Glad to see that latter isn't the case here, and very excited to see that you've other parts in the works!

As for this latest installment: I'm very much enjoying the way you've managed to keep all the elements in balance - angst, humor, etc. - without any running away with the rest. For what started out as "crack!fic," there's a lot of emotional depth, and solid characterization. You weave a wonderful narrative.

[obsession_inc]

Thank you very much!

[vr_trakowski]

I was just saying to cincoflex a few days ago that I loved this story and I really wished it had been finished.

I still love it, and I still want it to be finished--I am hoping madly that the lack of a "The End" at the bottom of the page means it's not. This is such an addictive plotline, and I'm suffering right along with Pepper and wondering just when--if--Tony is going to figure things out. Or maybe Jarvis will mention it? *snerk* His sketching her is stomach-dropping adorable, and I think you collectively have the characters down pat.

More? Please?

[obsession_inc]

Working on it! I have another story that's been in the works since October (a very, very, very belated response to the Halloween challenge) that I want to get out before May 7, but if I get that done, the next parts of this are on my list.

Thanks!

[maiken_phoenix]

I can't wait to read more. It's so nice to read. Which he would remember and just didn't tell her. Girl gotta keep dreaming..