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obsidianinks

Chapter 7 - The test to his answers

Dec 08, 2009 02:06

The still pool reflected the starry midnight sky, its smooth surface unmarred by the constant chilly wind that dragged at his clothes. Bejewelled diamonds winked back up at Jaejoong as he stared down at the puddle of water, pooling desolately within a chink on the crumbly concrete sidewalk. He glimpsed his pale reflection in the water, a slight ( Read more... )

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obsidianinks December 7 2009, 18:08:59 UTC

SPOT! for succexytop! and ting5! (^_^)

soory for the late update guys.. been obsessed with playing L4D2 these past few days.. hehehehe.. *bows in apology*

ting5 December 8 2009, 00:25:16 UTC

hahha i'm here and your forgiven...ahh Jae's curious abt finding 'the one'...love the Jaechun (soulmate) talk and inject of tad bit Yoosu past :) hmm Kit is Jae's umma right but who's Lily, hmm think i should go re-read prev chapters...look forward to updates ^-^

ting5 December 8 2009, 00:35:40 UTC

ahh they are both his umma i gather ^^

obsidianinks December 8 2009, 05:30:49 UTC

kukuku.. yes they are both his umma's. lily's the overprotective mum, while kit is the caring and affectionate mother who will always take care of her children.. (^_^)

agnetalovek December 7 2009, 18:26:00 UTC

hehe I'mn here again

obsidianinks December 8 2009, 05:31:10 UTC

lol (^_^)

azure_blue December 7 2009, 20:20:43 UTC

Yes! An update! I'm curious how Jae and Yunnie's relationship will bloom :D~ Looks like Jae's kinda scared to be around Yun right now ^^

obsidianinks December 8 2009, 05:36:40 UTC

ah! i saw your livejournal... your drawings are reallyyyy good!! ESPECIALLY THE YUNJAE ONESSSS.. lol jaejoongs bdae pic with the yoosu running around was just too cute.. ahhh! *glomps* love you~

azure_blue December 9 2009, 20:13:27 UTC

Awww, thank you for visit my journal XD I'm glad you like my drawing *smooches* I love your fic as well!! Please update soon ;D

hoshi14 December 7 2009, 22:37:27 UTC

Aww.. Jaejoong, see everyone else will take care of Yunho if he hurts you. He should see the light eventually.

hi_yu December 8 2009, 00:46:54 UTC

YES! i finally can comment after few chapters passed. cant do it then becoz of my phone had a problem with it's browser or something.
first, i'd like to say that i really really like the story. maybe it's the idea. or the plot. i dont know. the words are beautiful and the charas are deep and expressive, me like likey.....i hate plain or drab or out of this world unrealistic charas. All the charas here so far are very easy to understand although all of them are emotionally deep and complex.
love the way you move the story from one chap to another. a bit slow, but still nice.. i just hope it wont end soon and the update will be frequent heheheehe
love you..
hwaiting!!

obsidianinks December 8 2009, 05:41:31 UTC

thks for the lovely comment *hugs* you flatter me :) im just seeing how things go with this anddd hopefully you guys would like my story.. i was alil bit worried about the whole mythical creatures part and whether the story would become abit confusing.. but so far so good :)

sorry about it being slow, hope its not too draggy.. just need to convey certain emotions and thoughts.. i never really liked action packed stories that move too fast. kukuku, ah well, hope you like it..

love mel *huggles* (^_^)