Chapter 9 - Delving beneath his diamond heart

[obsidianinks]

Shrill weeping pierced his hazed vision, the soft choked sobs sending shivers of terror to trail down his spine, making itself known to him amidst the callous jeers and menacing shouts of the milling horde of villagers that surrounded him. He lifted his head blearily from his curled foetal position upon the muddy ground, to rest his horrified eyes

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[obsidianinks]

SPOT~! for ekin_hardy, succexytop and ting5! (^_^)

i tore my hair out trying to post this entry after slogging it out till 3 in the morn.. lj wont let me italise some words and place the *** in the center, go figure.. anyways, im sorry, theres no yoosu here, but there'll be lots in the next chapter. if i can finish it by this week that is.. hehehe sorry the long wait guys, just came back from bangkok. anyways I HOPE YOU GUYS LIKE THIS CHAPTER!! (^_^)
although its abit dry? *bows in advance*

[ekin_hardy]

describe 'dry' to me darling~~

eventhough there's no yoosu,, I'm satisfied with this chapter...my yoosu dose was filled by ur oneshot...btw,, u make me google-d bodhi...XD

He had glanced beneath the shelter of his cap with narrowed eyes whenever his sensitive ears picked out his name being uttered, watching Jaejoong for any telltale signs of his feelings towards Yunho. Jaejoong constantly surprised him, a delicate smile gracing his lips whenever Yunho was mentioned.

-I sensed a curious Yunho,,, trying to pick-up every small tiny detail of Jaejoong's action...-

What was the reason...

-Now, that's a good question Yunho....-

When I 1st read this fic,, I nvr knew that I'll be so hooked up by it...Do I regret google-d for 'obsidianinks' to find this fic? NO WAY~~

[obsidianinks]

hehehe, im glad you liked it dearie~! yunho finally has a glimpse of another side of jaejoong which i think really helps him to understand jae more.. my fingers have been itching to write this chapter for so long.. hehe, just that i have a lack of a computer in bangkok.

im really glad youre so hooked by it as well, thought the storyline would confuse alot of people.. (^_^) *hugs and kisses* OH! AND. *squish!* hahahahaha

love, mel

[ting5]

where's the dryness, i cant feel any dear :DD

ahh Yunho it sure is time for you to learn and understand Jae more but i guess he'll only know more if Jae will let him..Jae is such a sweetheart ne makes me want to squeeze him so hard *gets kicked* XD

Although this is all yunjae but it's still very satisfying to read..though i'll be waiting for Yoosu nxt chap dear ^-^

[hoshi14]

Aww..Jaejoong trusts him enough to show Yunho this part of his life.

[obsidianinks]

*nods nods nods*
mmmmhmmmmmm.... and yunho finally gets to see another side of jaejoong~ ^^ i hope you like this chapter..

[celinewalksin10]

Yunho must feel really guilty for being so cold to Jaejoong in the beginning. The tables have turned now, but I think Jaejoong's not cruel enough to make Yunho suffer more by being so aloof right when Yunho's getting mesmerized. haha

[obsidianinks]

new reader? yayyyyy *glomp*

O.o i LOVE your picture~! jae looks hawt.. hehehehe...

btw, thks for commenting dearie~ yun does feel bad about the whole initial incident but jae has sort of shown that he's forgiven him by bringing him along this trip.. EVEN YOOCHUN IS NOT ALLOWED TO HELP JAEJOONG, which shows how privileged yunho is...kukuku, yunjae love~

[celinewalksin10]

and i love your story! <3333

It's like I'm really stepping to another world when I read your fic. :D

[yo0chun_sshi]

i love this chapter very much!!! the progress of their connection is getting nicer~ hahaha!! yunho staring at jae was >_< kyaaaaaa!!1 totally made me giddy~

[obsidianinks]

kukuku~! im glad you like it *big smile*

I LOVE YOUR DISPLAY PIC BTW.. YOOSU LOVE MAKES ME GO KYAAAAA~! (^_^)

[obsidianinks]

heheheh *accepts chocolates* i had lotsa fun in bangkok although my feet hurt cause of the shopping and walking.. (^_^) AND i managed to fix livejournal by adding html codes in, MANUALLY.. *faints*

yuns past has always been haunting him unfortunately.. but his whole past will be revealed in the coming chapters.. now its just randome flashbacks.. kukuku~ im so eveil making yun suffer like this~ *slaps self*