Chapter 11 - Unspoken serpents.

[obsidianinks]

Silent and still, he waited with bated breaths for her body to move, twitch, anything. Nothing. His bare feet kissed the cold, hard ground as he padded forward to reach a tentative finger, grazing lightly over her smoothed brow. This wasn’t right. She shouldn’t be left alone out here. Where was her mother? Where was everyone?

He shifted from his

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[obsidianinks]

SPOT~! for ekin_hardy, ting5 and succexytop! (^_^)

this is my little merry christmas gift to you guys, even if you dont celebrate but what the heck, its my heartfelt gift to you. its the longest chapter ive ever written and i feel utterly tired but in a good, happy way... :)

i hope you guys like some of the revelations in this chapter and i hope it clears up some stuff.. sorry bout the cliffhanger at the end.. ehehe, i love cliffhangers!! *gets bricked* anyways, enjoy~! love, mel..

[ting5]

TQ dear..one of the best present i've received..albeit late but merry xmas to you too :)

I really love how you have a way with words, in desribing the surroundings and the emotions it helps me form pictures in my head much easier :D

So Yunho killed someone when he was turned, so that's what's been eating at him *contemplative* I'm still curious abt Jae's past, what he has been through..

Gosh you're a tease gal, a cliffy!!! Hmm wonder wonder who that stranger might be...ohh did I mention YunJae hug makes me feel warm all over, it's like they have advance one step more ^^

[obsidianinks]

hehe merry christmas to you too~! ^^

kukuku~ of course yunjae love, i kinda think that they've been at a standstill for some time, so now i have to push them alil bit more. and the stranger is here to help push them that extra mile.. still contemplating if i wanna include some action scenes.. what do you think?? O.o *blinks*

[ting5]

Ahh action..I so welcome those scenes too :D that will make things even more exciting..

I'm so curious of the identity of this foxy stranger ne..but I'll wait for you to reveal :)

HWAITING in both studies and also writing this!!

[munkymandee]

omo been waiting for this~ brb after i read ^^

[obsidianinks]

-_- i was waiting like the whole afternoon for your comment.. it took you half a day to read.. !?

[youinmyjumpsuit]

this fic really lures you in. <3
go for it jae! tell him you guys aren't monsters. ;)

[munkymandee]

damn cliffhangers!
wow all that about the balance of nature was really good. *engrossed*
hope yunho understands :[ i hope the guy isnt a werewolf of something lol. that would be baaadd. <3

[obsidianinks]

lol nah i have something against the cliche werewolf VS vampires thingy. this guy is good! he will help yunjae love~ :)

[munkymandee]

YAAAAAY :D btw i was in class so couldn't read but i saw it and i was like nooooooooo kept thinking about it throughout class -___-

[obsidianinks]

O.o im on a roll~ next chapter is out HAHAHAHA i want my candy!! *whines*

[obsidianinks]

(^_^) *hugs and kisses*

jae will help yunho to understand, along with help from others..