Chapter 15 - Unrevealed Catharsis.

Jan 10, 2010 22:53



The sharp tang of salt and brine settled thickly at the base of his tongue, stinging his sensitive nose as a light breeze weaved through the air. It ruffled his locks, tipping wispy strands to whip chaotically across his face, the merest whispering brush against his wind roughened cheeks. He felt the gritty surface of the rocks bite into his palm, ( Read more... )

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igit012 January 10 2010, 22:28:01 UTC
^*^ ... what's going on!?!?!?!???

oh is this why yoochun is such a stealthy tracker/fighter ...

now we're gona learn of Yoochung's past.

doesn't Jae already have enough money to help out his sister?

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obsidianinks January 11 2010, 08:50:18 UTC
O.o you guessed right~ yoochun is really good at what he does... seriously girl, you scare me with your ability to perceive what im trying to convey.. do you somehow know me in real life?? *looks over my shoulder*

hehe, oh and technically jae does have enough money to pay the debts, but since his sis never revealed herself to him, he couldnt really do anything. and now that he finds out, he cant buy his sis out cause ya know, bad ass mafia bosses want to make an example of the ppl who betray them.. so yeah, this calls for an all out invvasion or something.. ^^ surprises surprises.. must wait awhile

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obsidianinks January 11 2010, 08:52:05 UTC
yes, yoochun was a mafia boss before and yes, junsu was the one saying no... ^^

yeah, yunjae is slowly progressing, im glad you like this chappie~~ im currently using my schl's com right now to comment, hehe, couldnt wait till i got home.. thats how much i love you guys.. <3 *huggles*

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obsidianinks January 12 2010, 13:52:29 UTC
^^ ill be waiting

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youinmyjumpsuit January 11 2010, 15:24:32 UTC
it isn't short! gosh i couldn't sleep without reading your update. :D

yunho and jaejoong linking hands.. <3 everyone's fussing over it!

i love how you revealed yoochun's character. :D so he's the undead leader, but poor su's crying.. :(

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obsidianinks January 12 2010, 06:03:16 UTC
heee~ ^^ awww shucks *huggles*

^^ yunjae moment... *jumps around* i think yunhos so caring towards jaejae.. i wish someone would do that to me.. hehe :)

i know i know, susu's crying *gets slapped* but dont worry his tears will go away, with help from chunnie~! :D

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hoshi14 January 11 2010, 23:13:33 UTC
Why is Junsu crying?
Jaejoong sister has been watching, hmm..

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obsidianinks January 12 2010, 06:04:33 UTC
junsu's tears will be explained in the next chapter... it has something to do with yoochun and their past together.. ^^ its kinda like a sneak peek of what will be happening in my upcoming prequel story to this one..

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