Chapter 16 - A lightning before death.

[obsidianinks]

“No, no, no.” Junsu whispered brokenly, a single lone dewdrop slipping free of its crystal chasm to peel past his curled lashes, trembling down a slightly quavering cheek with each shallow, heaving breath. He bit down harshly upon his bottom lip, stifling the unbidden tremors that clawed through his thin frame, wracking his hunched shoulders, his

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[agnetalovek]

I don't get the begining, -Junse was gone and then Yoochun was all miserbal. Why is he gone?

[obsidianinks]

[“Junsu?” Yoochun called out weakly, staggering drunkenly upright. Changmin felt a pang of pity assault his heart, a fleeting glimpse of pure misery contorting the man’s chiselled features into a mask of regret, before he caught the uncertain glance that Yoochun sent Kit's way. Kit nodded her head curtly, releasing him from his duty, to flee in a maddened dash, his pale form streaking away past the gaping hollow of the doors entrance, to melt away into the shadowed recesses. A flurry of panicked limbs, an earnest quest to locate the other half of his heart- his soul.]---> this part is where yoochun goes after junsu after hes miserable, heh.. junsu is gone because he doesnt like the fact that yoochun is going to put himself into danger.. i was gonna explain in the next chapter, but nvm ill tell it to you now ^^

[agnetalovek]

ahhhh hehe me beeing slow*donk*

[junsu_luvr]

WHY DO PEOPLE KEEP LEAVING??!?! DDD:
Reeeeeeally want to know what's happening with Yoosu and why Junsu is so freaked out.
I love how Changmin is so analytical.
Can't wait for the next chapter!!! ^^

[obsidianinks]

HAHAHAHA~ sorry sorry... no one else is gonna leave anymore~ they will all band together eventually ^^

hehe, of course.. changmin is the smartest after all and being an assassin means he has to be analytical.. :)

[hoshi14]

I really like the part where Yunho sees wings on Jaejoong.
Now Junsu and Jaejoong are gone!
Is Jaejoong going to try and do things by himself?

[obsidianinks]

O.o how'd you guess... huhuhu~ jaejae is gonna do something stoopid soon.

[obsidianinks]

(^_^) *glomps* thank you for your lovely comment~ im glad you like this chapter.. i feel so motivated now *jump jump*

awww, thanks.. it was no problem, writing is kinda like my hobby now, and i couldnt wait for too long or else a HUGE COLOSSAL writers block might set in and i wont be able to continue the story.. so i must keep up the momentum.. ^^

[obsidianinks]

hee~ you and i share the same problem.. im still in holiday-mode.. cant really seem to concentrate enough to do work...

awww, i feel kinda bad making junsu cry, but yoochun will be there to save him!! ^^