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obsidianinks

Chapter 18 - The plummeting journey to meet his maker.

Feb 05, 2010 22:02

The room was densely quiet, save for a musical tinkling bell that chirruped cheerily with each frisky jump. A feathery ball reduced to ripped mulch was flung haphazardly across his vision- a streaking blur of garishly dyed colours- before a swift flick of a black paw pinned the miserable toy to the ground, a single curved claw sinking menacingly ( Read more... )

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Comments 27

dilovesyunjae February 6 2010, 02:00:09 UTC

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!&^*(&^*&%^&*&^%*&O%&^$%&^%&&(%((%&*

&^%&(%&*(^*(&^()...Jae, why the fick did you leave without yunho!!! dammit..im so sorry for spazzing but im just sooo damn angry...argghh

obsidianinks February 6 2010, 05:03:20 UTC

hehehehe... now now.. *takes away your knife* yes, jae is stupid in thinking that he can take leeteuk on alone.. tsk.. yunho will come soon enough.. ^^

galgal79 February 6 2010, 03:32:42 UTC

Where is Yunho???? Oh My god, you must lt him save his Jae in time and let Leeteuk die under Yunho's hands.

obsidianinks February 6 2010, 04:30:37 UTC

hee, yunho will come to save jaejoong in all his glorious shining armour... the black knight so to speak.. hehe, yesss, leeteuk will die.. but still unsure on how to kill him.. *sigh*

torrilg February 6 2010, 03:37:38 UTC

New reader here. ^^
I have to say... I've read sooo many YunJae fanfics, and this is by far one of my favorites. I spent like... Half of today reading the chapters that you have up so far, and you've got me hooked! I love the way you write.

Poor Joongie in this chapter.. TT_TT
I'll definitely be waiting for the next update!

obsidianinks February 6 2010, 04:32:12 UTC

oh yayyy~!! new reader! *huggles* always welcome.. hehe, thanks, you flatter me~~ *flaps hand* but i still have a long way to go to improve, but im glad you like the story so far... yeah, poor joongie, but yunho will come!! *nods*

more savoeun08 February 8 2010, 04:48:14 UTC

hope in the next chapter Yunho will save Yae in time and tear Leeteuk body in pieces for what he had done.
Please update soon, cant wait to read more

thank u

Re: more obsidianinks February 12 2010, 16:32:15 UTC

oh~! new reader?? yayyyy~ *glomps*

heh, sorry for late reply.. schools been a stellar performer in torturing me this week.

(^_^) im glad you like the story so far..

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obsidianinks February 12 2010, 16:31:03 UTC

ehehe im a phail too.. sorry for the late reply.. my fingers are on the verge of falling off since i had to do a 1 and half hour gp paper today.. *cries*

heh, remember the part where leetuek feeds him some pills.. yeahhhh thats why jae cant do anything.

yunhos coming~ no worries~ (^_^)