Chapter 19 - Haunting slashes of crimson.

Feb 14, 2010 21:38



“I’ll repeat myself one last time. Yoochun,” Kit said sharply, fixing her unblinking stare upon Yoochun's solemn frame silhouetted against the moon with hooded eyes. “will lead Junsu, Yunho, Lily and Airi to remove the guard dogs. Changmin and I will wait for the all-clear signal before we enter the house. Remove any guards that come in the way. No ( Read more... )

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obsidianinks February 14 2010, 13:42:53 UTC
whoo~ phew! i finished it!! spot~ for ting5, ekin_hardy and sucxcexytop! hais, what can i say, i hope you guys like this chapter and are happy with the, errr, whatever happened to leeteuk. theres some jaeho love goin on and i think its like my second fav so far. the first is when they were cuddled together on the bed. hehehe oh and... HAPPY CHINESE NEW YEAR!!

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ting5 February 15 2010, 01:10:39 UTC
Love all the action, I can imagine them in my head ^^

My heart breaks when I read the Su and Jae's exchange, but am so glad Yunho did what he did to Leeteuk, he deserves such an end!

Whew the hard part now is for Jae to accept and put what has happened behind him, I'm sure Yunho will help him with that, hmm and of course for him and his sis to be back on terms :)

P.S. I',m really curious fo Yoosu story esp what Su said to Jae when he found him ^^ *eating oranges* Thanx and hmm happy CNY to you too :)

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obsidianinks February 15 2010, 05:32:12 UTC
(^_^) *snuggles* im glad you found it vivid enough.. hehehe the sujae part was a hint~ like give you a clue what is in the prequel.. heee~ im so happy you managed to pick it up.. hmmm your yoosu radar is quite perceptive

*nods nods* leeteuk does deserve a horrible death for touching jaeomma! yunho will be helping him now.. but his sis wont stay for long though.. ok, ive said too much.. hee *scampers off*

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ting5 February 15 2010, 09:53:27 UTC
LOL really, I guess I'm sensitive on things that involves Yoosu :D

Ahh well I wouldnt blame her, she's just human...hehehe I guess I'll have to find out later on :)

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obsidianinks February 14 2010, 13:44:36 UTC
spot for youinmyjumpsuit, gu2duck, jeshara and dilovesyunjae ^^
YUNHOS HERE!!! yayyy~ *jumps around with pom poms* hehehe, i hope you guys like this chapter.. (^_^)

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obsidianinks February 14 2010, 14:52:25 UTC
kuku~ thats fast.. o.O mmm watch this chinese movie called 'painted skin'. its about the chinese traditional folklore about fox spirts and they usually eat human hearts to sustain themselves. thats where i got my idea from. its not really that gruesome, the main actress simply pressed her palm upon her victims chest, and you hear this snapping, crackling sound of their ribs cracking. and the heart kinda gets absorbed invisibly into her palm. *cough cough* im rambling, im sorry~ hehehe :)

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youinmyjumpsuit February 15 2010, 03:19:35 UTC
i looove this chapter!
is it weird that i was so happy yunho was so fierce with lee teuk? >< it's just.. he was ENRAGED that someone touched HIS jaejoong. now that line made me go <3

changmin and his smirk. totally fits in this chapter. the gore and his seemingly bored state of mind in killing people. slight disinterest cause it's boring. :))

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kattan69 February 14 2010, 14:30:34 UTC
Poor Jae!...although Leeteuk did die horribly in Yunho's hands but the deed has already been done. Now Yunho has to cure Jae from his ordeal.

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obsidianinks February 15 2010, 05:39:42 UTC
*nods nods* leeteuk = beheaded.. oh, and getting his heart eaten.. hmmm, cant really think of anything more to do to him.. heheh now its all about yunjae~ <3

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hoshi14 February 14 2010, 18:09:56 UTC
I'm glad they got there before anything else happened to Jaejoong. I was surprised that Leeteuk did not expect any of the others to come.

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obsidianinks February 15 2010, 05:41:20 UTC
lol, leeteuk was gonna kill the sister first than jae so its good that they came in time.. yeahhh, leeteuk is kinda stupid especially when he gets angry.. and i think that finding out his wife cheated on him kinda pushed him over the edge, in a matter of speech. lol

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wilim February 14 2010, 19:07:19 UTC
wow! i realy love this update! ima write a proper coment later on, i mean a longer one cus im only using a PSP to read and comment ryt now. can u imagine how difficult ths is? lol. anyway, i got too excitd w/ ur update that i thot i can deal w/ jus using a PSP. lol. stupid me. i promise u a nicer coment later. lol

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