Chapter 20 - A spiralling descent along seething tears.

[obsidianinks]

Hongki had never regarded himself as truly outstanding nor exceptionable. He was never really that good at sports, or was he the top scorer in the class. Heck, he wasn’t even popular during school, only existing as another nameless, callous youth that sauntered down the choked hallways of his neighbourhood school. He had never been awarded for

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[glamdiva28]

all caught up. i love this chappie. oh yunho, what a confession. cant wait for the next chap

[obsidianinks]

(^_^) im glad you liked it~!

[shinchul303]

I don't find this chapter ANY kind of fail!

Hongki gives us a chance to see all the main characters fresh all over again which is total win.

I loved the car getaway scene--so movie like.

Yoochun and Yunho's brief talk, set by firelight...very warm and genuine.

And of course, YunJae. Read the last paragraphs twice and cried along with Joongie both times.

This remains one of my favorite current fics!

[obsidianinks]

heee~! IM SAVING YOU A SPOT NEXT CHAPTER! *nods nods and pinky swear*

haha, youre the only one that mentioned about hongki.. i think thats my fav part of the whole chapter, ironically.. because changmin was playing around with poor hongki.. ahahaha, and he wasnt joking about swimming across the channel either, he used to do it when he was a little boy.

awww, i just reread the last few paragraphs... im glad you liked it.. but you didnt really shed tears right.. cause if you did then im sorry!! *dabs away tears* but its good tears, not heartbroken ones :)

aihihi~! *glomps you* thankyouthankyouthankyou.. you just made my day! (^_^)

[shinchul303]

No one's ever offered to save me a spot before!

And as to the crying--yes, it's true (though I'll deny it in court).

I cried each time I read the closing paragraphs.

Ah Jae...cold as ice on the outside, but inside a warm, terribly vulnerable, beautiful heart.

Yunho is a truly a lucky creature. And in your story, he's starting to realize it.

[shinchul303]

I'm so glad you said Changmin used to actually swim the channel when he was younger...because in reading your prose I really had the impression he was telling the TRUTH--even though he defused it with his comment "Just kidding; actually I took the plane".

Have I mentioned how much I'm in love with this fic?

AWESOME writing!

[jyllchan]

finally you post new chapter <3
i love the story but didn't fully read it coz i'll save until the story end...just couldn't endure my anxious *poor me* :p

[obsidianinks]

o.O new reader or silent reader??

[jyllchan]

silent reader until 10 days ago *ashamed*
but actually i found your fic when you post chapter 15 or 16 on jaeho_detox ^^

[obsidianinks]

10 days ago?? hmm.. *thinks*

no matter, im just glad you like the story so much~! makes you wonder how many people are actually reading my story apart from the readers who comment.. o.O *does a little dance*

yayyy~ i reached 40 comments! half of which is mine, but heck it. 40!! *beams* i feel.. accomplished. hope you continue reading and commenting dearie! :)

[dilovesyunjae]

ahhh...they're gonna make it, the both of them...they have to be strong for each other...i love yunjae..*sobs*

[obsidianinks]

lol i just realised that this chapter is very sad... i didnt mean for it to be that heartbreaking though.. *gets slapped* hehe, yunjae love's gonna make it, no worries! (^_^)