Chapter 21 - Exchanged Spirits.

[obsidianinks]

Drawing his knees up, he stared down into nothing. He shivered. There was nothing here, just stark, empty space. Was he still dreaming? It was cold though- freezing. Jaejoong whipped his head, casting his eyes about, meeting a solid wall of black all around him. It was smothering and seductively smooth, like oil flowing across water- it inched its

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[obsidianinks]

spot~ for ekin_hardy  and ting5  (i finally know how to do the linking user thingy.. *slaps self* im so slow -_-*)

gah, im super tired and super sorry for the long wait bb's~ *glomps you both cause i miss you guys* schools been a killer this week and i have tons of homework to do so i hope your comments can cheer me up *cries*

ehehehe, i hope you guys like this chapter.. a large part was yunjae, but somehow, i like the last part the best... especially yoochuns last sentence.. hee~ (^_^)

[ekin_hardy]

*enjoy being glomped by my bb^^*

*Jumps around, up and down*
Bb, I love this chapter, I love it..I swear..~~

I love everything about it...
coz it finally struck that stupi Vamp! head that he loves Joongie...Talked about being old n slow..lol

and the whole intimate 'I feed you, You feed me' part is the best...Its so sensual n sexy I cant stop grinning ~~~

and Jiyong a.k.a Gdragon appearance got me high (p/s:eventhough i told my sis i dont like G-D, I think i lied...i have a secret crush for him...I think..XD)

and Yoochun is responsible for cleaning the mess..the problem is, does Su knows it? I bet he will b furious if he knows coz he hates Chunnie having any connection with is gang rite...or not?

Miss You,,Miss You...~~and this story...and ur Jaesu as well..GAWD!!! I'M SELFISH..but dats coz I love u bb^^

[obsidianinks]

heee~ hmm i dont have much to say since i already talked to you over msn... (-_-)" ehehehe~

but yeah, yun is kinda slow.. but deep down he knew it all along, he just didnt want to admit to himself..

heh, i thought the 'you feed me, i feed you' part was going to be weird.. but i guess its smutty enough to make everyone happy.. *naughty grin*

*screams* GD! ehehe i dont tell my friends that i like him as well.. cause they are like fanatics of dbsk and will shoot me down.. *shakes head*

ah, yoochun. su doesnt know, but i dont think he'll be that angry, more like relieved that nothing bad happened to yoochun. hes soft at heart for the vamp.. (^_^)

i miss you too~~ but school.. gah! please, burn it down.. *cries* aish, ive been itching to complete my jaesu like for a long time.. but i have hw.. *stabs self*

[ting5]

*glomps you back* caused I so miss ya too :D

I love how YunJae has come around...the Yunho (finally!) knows he loves Jae (like duh)....

Ohh Ohhh and their pleasure-filled feeding...hehhe Yunho wont have to be jealous of JaeChun now...idk why but when I read that I cant help but think abt Yoosu doing that *slaps self*

Ooooh new char G-Dragon eh, hehhe Yoochun's a softie at heart...but does Su knows he's in contact with GD(?) And well hope the escaped guard wont be a prob..

Thanx for the update amidst your bz school life, it'll all be worth it someday (when you get your grades) But rem there's time to study, and also time to play, ok I sound like a mother XD *smooches you* tk till nxt time ^^

[obsidianinks]

spot~! for youinmyjumpsuit ,gu2duck , jeshara , dilovesyunjae , hoshi14 , wilim  and shinchul303

*showers you guys with hugs* cause im super tired and alil crazy from lack of sleep. AND CAUSE I MISS YOU GUYS~ <3

[youinmyjumpsuit]

i miss you too!!!!
super sensual yunjae in here! i love it!
the kiss was like the final most intimate thing, and it was so well written. :D :D
i like gdragon here. :D after reading his interview, i wanted to really see him as the dong seng
:D

[obsidianinks]

*glomps* you are like the first! ahhh~ the kiss had me melting on the inside.. haha, jae is so shy~ *pinches his cheeks (if i can)*

(^_^) im glad you liked GD.. interview? what interview?

[wilim]

Yey!!!! UPDATE!!!
Just finished reading it. And thank goodness I'm not using the PSP this time. :D

Anyway, about your update. I shall praise it NOW!!!
Ho my, the yunjae development is wonderful. Not too fast, nor is it painfully slow!!! YAAAAAY. And it's kinda funny how they start together by literally feeding each other off FIRST before the kiss. Lol. Like what you wrote, feeding among beings is rather intimate. Hahahaha!!!
So, aside from that, I really like their conversations together. Oooooh, I just realized, A LOT of their conversations were in the bedroom. HAhahahahahaha!!! And I like it so much that they have a kitty!!!!!!! :D <3 YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY!!!!!!!!!! Oh and! The way you described all their emotions and how they conveyed them, how Yunho and Jaejoong seemed to understand each other sooooo much, I LIKE IT! It's like, you don't overdo their characters, uknow? Like, Ho's not overly macho, or how Jae's not too vulnerable, as well as the other characters. I love the dyanmic of everyone in this story. AND you really just had

[k032290]

wow! an update!
will read later. have school!

thanks for this!

[obsidianinks]

(^_^) new reader? or have you commented somewhere before.. i remember seeing your dp.. *scratches head*

[k032290]

i honestly don't remember if i did or not.
but i read this before. maybe i forgot to comment?
sorry! T.T

[obsidianinks]

*thinks* ah well, no matter~ can just start here~ (^_^) im guessing your schools over.. but when i saw your comment, it was like at 2 in the morn over here in singapore... o.O so im guessing you live very far away~ >.

[torrilg]

Even though I was feeling a bit down today, this update lifted my spirits a lot!! I love the YunJae scenes, and also how you added G-Dragon into the end of the chapter. =D
Beautiful writing... I can't describe how much I love the way you write out the scenes; it's as if I'm actually there.

I would write a longer comment, but my computer has been having really bad problems. Sorry I didn't comment on your previous 2 chapters!
Will be looking forward to your next update ^^

[obsidianinks]

(^_^) *huggles* im glad it made you happy! i feel so accomplished now.. *gets slapped* huu~ awww, thanks.. my writing can still improve though, so hopefully you'll get to read better fics from me in the future.. <3

[torrilg]

Your writing is already perfect to me.. ^_^
Well I'll definitely be following your future fics!

[glamdiva28]

LOVED this chapter. thanks for the update. looking 4wrd 2 more

[obsidianinks]

hee~ im glad you liked it (^_^)