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[FICLET] Jealousy

Aug 05, 2011 19:55

Title: Jealousy
Pairing: Sakuraiba, One-sided Sakumiya
Ratings: PG-13
Disclaimer: I only own the storyyyy
Summary: Jealousy kills...
Word Count: 403
Warnings: Unbeta-ed, Angsty angsty moments, Character Death
A/N: Wrote this for an English compo and... yeah xD

Sequel
Follower

( Nino watched from his position from behind a viewfinder as a couple sat down on a park bench, fingers interlocking. )

p: sakumiya, c: sakurai sho, c: ninomiya kazunari, p: sakuraiba, !ficlet, r: pg-13, c: aiba masaki, g: angst

Comments 16

racanai August 5 2011, 13:13:58 UTC

No, Nino, no! You can't kill Aiba! :o Your beloved Sho will be sad if you do that!
But a great story!^^

obstilation August 6 2011, 11:21:47 UTC

Yes! But Nino wasn't thinking well D: Ahh~

Thank you for reading and commenting! :D

tomacoma August 5 2011, 13:21:59 UTC

Awwww nooo, Aiba cannot die!!! :( Still this was a beautifully written little piece. I enjoyed it :)

obstilation August 6 2011, 11:41:06 UTC

Dx Haha xD

Thank you for reading and commenting! :D Glad that you had enjoyed it :)

hinamoyashi27 August 5 2011, 13:47:43 UTC

OMG W-WHAT..... ;___;

Nino like cool only hahaha. But he's gonna kill Aiba what........? ;_; sobs. D: BB u can't do this to me omg. T.T

Thanks for sharing anw. HAHA SURE GET 30/30 for your essay la hor. 8D

obstilation August 6 2011, 11:46:24 UTC

Yes BB? Hahahaha xD -evil mood-

IKR! I can imagine him in his that goggles picture (with yellow background) Hehehe >D

I HOPE I CAN XD LOLL THANKS FOR READING :DDD

diahlee486 August 5 2011, 14:31:51 UTC

cool!Nino with sniper is cool!!!!!!
haha. even though i'm against him killing aiba but cool nino with sniper is hard to resist xD lol
great story dear. i love it. thanks for sharing :)

obstilation August 6 2011, 11:52:49 UTC

I know right? Hahaha xD Nino + Sniper = Mind blown xD

Thank you for reading and commenting! :D I'm glad you liked it! :D

tilla91 August 5 2011, 16:05:51 UTC

*kicking snipaaaaa* (Gomen, Somehow, it just.. popped up in my head xD LOL ) Noooo Nino! U can't kill Aiba! (Though I loved this fic) =P I would really like an sequel, but I'm not sure HOW there can be one..... hmmm =P

Anyway, thanks for sharing! =)

obstilation August 6 2011, 12:37:37 UTC

Haha! I was thinking about it when I wrote 'Sniper' Hahaha!

Welllllllll, actually I already got one sequel which I'm posting up later xD Hahaha xD You guys put a lot of ideas in my head! xD

Thank you for reading and commenting! :DDD Glad you likes it :3

tilla91 August 6 2011, 13:13:37 UTC

OMG!! This made my day! I'm gonna stalk your page just! xD