[One-shot] My safe haven

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Title: My safe haven.
Pairing: Sakumoto
Ratings: PG-13
Disclaimer: I only own the storyyyy
Summary: For this prompt in the arashi_anonmeme kink meme [Sho has amnesia, someone searches for him and finds him in a dark, dangerous place - which is supposedly some underground auction selling people for questionable purposes. At first the person (of your choice)

Comments

[orenji_kiseki]

oh! this is the best Halloween treat I have received so far~~! ah excuse me for not introducing myself earlier, this is the OP :D!!! why was I so set on not revealing myself earlier? silly me! *hits self*

I'm so happy to see the new part in this verse, so happy I have tears of joy&disbelief in my eyes ;______;!
It's still just as great as the earlier parts too! I loved to see Sho having his memory attacks and Jun being all kind and caring... and even having his fanboy moment~~ (that was so cute!) and he confessed!!!

...ah I can understand why it's the last part, though it makes me sad, I love this verse you created from my prompt so much ;____; (and I of course mem-ed all the parts =D) I know that from now on it would be just about them happily living together and eventually Sho's inner worries while he gains his memories back, so this timing makes a lot of sense. but of course, I would love to see their date, no matter if it was a date inside the flat or outside!...xDI don't think their relationship is progressing too fast :) the

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This is the first time I have ever gotten such a long comment XD But I'm definitely not complaining :3 Haha! Hi thar OP!

Haha! I did mention about having a new part and it was half done already so... Hehe (^_^)v Sho having memory attacks reminds me TQS, which was absolutely wonderful xD

Maybe, just maybe there might be short drabbles here and there but for now, I think that's basically all XD I leave the rest to your imagination 8D

Haha! Glad you think the speed is fitting! I was a little worried at first but now I feel assured XD Haha!

Haha! The Queen-sized bed part wasn't intentional but now that you mentioned it... Opps? Hahaha! Sorry Jun! XD We may now conclude that Sho is adorable! Woohoo~ xD

Like always, I still suck at giving proper replies T^T... But I'm really really happy you liked it! Your comment just made my day too! Thank you for reading and giving the prompt and for the awesome comments you always give! \(//▽//)\

Hug away! \(^_^)/ *jumps on you*

[dekkawai]

even though I want Sho to say that he love Jun too...but I still love the ending..
thank you for this xD *sorry, always suck when comment*

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Haha! Sho will muster up the courage to say that some day soon!! XD I'm glad you liked it! :D

No need for apologies! Thank you for reading and commenting!! :D

[jellybean6972]

I think because of the situation Sho's in, he could either fall in love fast with Jun or take forever, so I think it's fine if the relationship seems to be moving too fast. Plus, it's up to you how you want the story to pan out :)

Thanks for sharing :)

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Haha, Jun caring for him probably pushed Sho to love him a little more ^_^ I'm glad you think it's okay :D

Thank you for reading and commenting!! :D

[boblemon]

An interesting development. I can't believe that Jun can control himself so much after taking advantage of him the first night. I think their relationship is okay, because I've heard that victims often times fall in love with their captors, since that's all they know and are led to believe (like Jun did in this). So even though their relationship is screwed up, I think it works.

Anyway, I'd love to see one more of this, how things progress and whether Sho actually did change his mind to stay and if that's just because he was so scarred after his accident. :)

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Sorry for the late reply! ^_^;

Ahaha, the wonders of fiction~ But the first time was an impulsive decision I suppose hehe xD Their relationship is pretty weird eh. Come to think of it, Sho's being (kinda) brainwashed by Jun xD

I'm not sure if there's any more to this though I like your suggestions hehe. If ever I get the inspiration or anything, I'll attempt it but I guess for the moment, this is probably the last one xD

Thank you for reading and commenting! :D

[jaricchi]

to be honest, it's really well done. but i think it's going to fast, (or maybe its because you time skip a lot). The characterization isn't so fully evolved, but this it has potential. And I'm sorry if I'm rambling, I didn't mean to sound rude.

This IS, emphasis on the IS, A REALLY GOOD FIC. I hope to read more and more power to you! :d I like broken Sho! :3

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It's alright! I personally think that this went too fast too. I think it's because I have this bad habit of wanting to get straight to the ending I have in mind so I tend to skip over a lot of things! No worries about sounding rude! I'm all open to critics and opinion and I'm thankful that you've decided to share them with me!

I'm really glad you think so though I'm not sure if there would be anymore from this universe! I adore broken Sho :B

Ps. I can stare at your icon forever

[jaricchi]

8'D~♥ But aside from those, you're a really awesome writer! Power to you and your fics!

D'awww, but that's okay! And me too! I absolute ADORE broken Sho! (Hence, why I love writing them xP)

P.S.Thanks haha, I have a lot of Sho icons that I haven't uploaded bec they're much too large for LJ. :P

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Aw, you just made me very very happy 8D ahaha xD

There's something about Sho being so... Broken that is just unf in all the right places. I think it might be the influences from TQS2. That drama was perfect! And you have all my encouragement and motivation to write more :p hehehe

D'aw, Sho is so adorable in that icon! I only have a few and i don't even use the rest mainly because I'm lazy and often forget i have other icons other than my current Aiba one xD