[The Beatles] Fic: (Ain't No Cure For The) Summertime Blues

[obstinatrix]

Title: (Ain't No Cure For The) Summertime Blues
Pairing: John/Paul
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: ~3000
Summary: The summer of 1959, scorching from April to September, set records still unbroken for English summer heat. John and Paul are bloody sick of it.
Notes: This is for tini_91 because I promised. It's not exactly plot-heavy.

Comments

[bbgirlz]

The image of Paul stripping is just delicious, BUT the image of Paul stripping for John is... ugh! ... too hot. I like the idea you left me with: John looking at Paul with that dumbstruck, needy, but patient, look on this face; you know, as if seeing his savior for the very first time. LOL.

John was past resisting, now. Besides, he wanted to know what Paul was planning; he bit his lip, hips jerking, when Paul lifted one long leg and without a word, straddled John's thigh, not quite touching, one arm curling around John's neck.

*sighs*

"Oh well," Paul said, and squeezed John's thigh. "Tell you what -- I'll run the bath. Bet we can both fit, if we're creative."
"Another Lennon/McCartney original," John said, and stood up. "You're on."

I wouldn't mind if you wrote the bath scene :P

[obstinatrix]

Oh my goodness, I've just realised I never replied to the comments on this. *facepalm* So rude of me. Thank you so much, I'm so glad you liked this! I had fun writing it. :3

[obstinatrix]

I have only just realised I never replied to the comments on this. DUH. Please forgive my lateness in thanking you for your comment. :)

I love in-denial, messing-around teenage J/P. :D

[tini_91]

Uuuh Jay, I don't even know where to start with this, because it was exactly what I needed for this day, as you know. You're still the best for writing this, thank you so much, darling. ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

So Paul undresses in a girly way, hm? Funnily enough, I can totally picture him doing it like that. xD And the striptease was very nice.

I love that Paul got to suck John off because his mouth was made for that purpose only. I mean what.

THANK YOU FOR THIS, I LOVE YOU ♥

[obstinatrix]

OMG I NEVER REPLIED TO THE COMMENTS ON THIS FIC D:

I LOVE YOU TOO ♥

[tini_91]

SHAME ON YOUR COW, JAY

But I love you moar ♥

[obstinatrix]

MY COW IS TOTALLY ASHAMED OF ITSELF.

Nuh-uh. ♥

[jpgr1963]

Ooooooh... that was lovely.

JP

[obstinatrix]

Somehow I've only just realised I never replied to the comments on this fic. DUH. Thank you :D

[catkick]

this was great. I love long drawn-out seductions from naughty John. They're hard to write but I love them and yours here is great!