[Fic] Pools of Sorrow, Waves of Joy (Jared/Jensen, NC-17)

[obstinatrix]

For salt_burn_porn

Title: Pools of Sorrow, Waves of Joy
Pairing: Jared/Jensen
Rating:: NC-17
Summary: Jared and Jensen haven't seen each other for a decade. Then, of all the bars in all the towns in all the world, Jensen has to walk into this one. I'm sorry, this doesn't really have anything to do with the prompt at all. *cough*
Notes: SORRY, I WROTE THIS ON

Comments

[verucasalt123]

Gorgeous, love how you describe that crazy swoopy feeling in Jared's stomach, so visceral.

[obstinatrix]

Thanks so much! :)

[jackles67]

This was so hot! I love that they have all this history and that this is kind of like a huge deal for them and yet it happens so easily.

[obstinatrix]

Thank you! :)

[dugindeep]

Excellent start to SBP!

[obstinatrix]

Thank you! :)

[a_biting_smile]

Okay, first off, what you write on a stinkin' iPhone on a train ride is better than I could muster with an entire week of concentration and silence and a god-damned thesaurus. So there's THAT. And yes, this was stupid hot. But yanno what kills me? Is how you set the scene, these characters, rocked the upper hand back and forth so artfully and ended it perfectly, deliciously, in under 2,000 words.

I hate you; I want one.

[amberdreams]

hee hee I thought the same. I have author envy right now....

[obstinatrix]

Haha, well, I work best under pressure, maybe? :D And with this dynamic it had to be a fight for the upper hand, I think. :3 Thank you!

[chemm80]

Nice start!

[obstinatrix]

Thank you! :)