Comments | ochi_iru135: it's us.

ochi_iru135

it's us.

Oct 18, 2011 17:50

I’m a shoe. And you’re a traffic sign ( Read more... )

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Re: Good job. ochi_iru135 October 30 2011, 12:25:22 UTC

So this means you don't want me to just tell you what it means? I will if you want, but that would kinda ruin the fun... Then again I'm not sure if it's even possible to understand that last sentence on your own... I could give a hint at least?
Anyway, I'm glad that you like it :D I was a bit annoyed that your first reaction to this was so lame.

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Re: Good job. ochi_iru135 October 30 2011, 14:13:27 UTC

I can't think of a hint that won't be too revealing... Just try to figure it out by yourself for now, and I'll give you that hint when/if you get sick of trying. I will say that there is at least one sentence that 'the shoe' says earlier in the poem that would give out what 'the traffic sign' would feel about something. (sorry if this doesn't help, it's extremely vague)
I am so honored. Looking forward to it :)