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direbanshee November 16 2009, 06:29:41 UTC
though I haven't seen it since I was twelve, this sounds like 'People Under the Stairs' (awesome movie, btw) well, what I remember at least. Is this by any chance a cross with that?
Either way, looks like you're off to a good start :)

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octobersghosts November 16 2009, 12:01:54 UTC
Haha, no :O I saw that movie too though. It was pretty freaky.
Thanks!

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laifan November 16 2009, 11:58:37 UTC
Oh wow I really love this. Your descriptions are perfect and powerful.

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octobersghosts November 16 2009, 12:02:24 UTC
Thank you so much :) I'm glad you liked it so much.

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laura_trekkie November 16 2009, 22:49:32 UTC
Well, this is certainly a depressing start, but it's also quite intriguing. Why is her mother like that? Is it something as 'simple' as possession, or is it down to some sort of psychotic break? Where will the guys fit in and what will they be able to do?

Can't wait for the next bit!

Laura.

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