The Big O: Part 3/5

[octune]

Title: The Big O
Pairing: Nishikido Ryo/Ueda Tatsuya
Genre: Crackfic (6000~ words, PG-13)
Disclaimer: Not mine. Boo.
Author’s Notes: HAY GAIZ, THIS IS NOW COMPLETELY AU BECAUSE OF THE WHOLE JIN-BACK THING.
Beta'd by the illustrious conser and krissonia, and posted during exam week because thewhiteprophet has mob connections. :|

Summary: "We're going to have a camera following

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[saturnial]

OH MY GOD. IT'S FINALLY DONE. I CAN SLEEP NOW.

In other news, first comment.

[octune]

*dances*

[conser]

Eternal win!

How long until the massive undergoing that is chapter four? ^_~

[saturnial]

Don't even mention it yet. *twitches* I demand a holiday in the bahamas first.

[anyotherknight]

*pouts*

Sowwie.

[saturnial]

Ohno singing into a shower head cures all ills. ONWARDS AND UPWARDS AND HOPEFULLY FINALLY INWARDS. :D

[samenashi]

OH MY GODDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD I LOVE YOUUUUUUUUUUU KLFJAS;LKJFLKSDJF OKAY. OKAY LET ME GATHER MY THOUGHTS.

- PRINCESS. EVERY TIME RYO SAYS IT I AM JUST FILLED WITH DELIGHT.
- PUNCHING AND CRYING AND RYO NURSING A SPLIT LIP. WONDERFUL.
- Ryo and Ueda in the bathroom and fjalksdjf "LIFE ISN'T SHOUNEN CLUB" ahhh. I think it's easy to fall into the mindset of, you know, ~INTENSE ENEMIES WHO WANT TO SEE EACH OTHER DEAD~ which on the one hand makes for great fic (VERY HARRY/DRACO-Y), but on the other, is, you know, really way too strong and pretty unlikely. AND THAT LEADS ONTO;
- Smooth Ryo. GOD. Why is he so awesome? I like how kind of in control he is, it makes Ueda seem all the more helpless and "MY LIFE"ish.
- OH GOD THE PHOTOSHOOTS. BATH TIME. SO WONDERFUL. I would pay good money for those photos. :(
- ♥♥♥ KIDS ♥♥♥
- PERVERTED JUNNO. SO GREAT.
- Ueda getting all distracted by Ryo's prettiness.
- RYO SNAPPING AT SOMEONE WHO ISN'T UEDA. God I love the idea of Ueda just trailing along after Ryo, silently hating his life.

Ueda was

[anyotherknight]

OH GOD I WAS SO WORRIED YOU WOULDN'T LIKE IT. The bathroom scene cause me, like, three weeks of angst.

[samenashi]

WHAT WHY. WHY. TO BOTH THINGS. WHAT'S NOT TO LIKE.

[anyotherknight]

I'm horrible like this. conser and krissonia spent seven hours stroking my ego and picking at typos last night. D:

[aoi_haiiro]

AMAZING. <33333 In the words of McDonald's ads, I'm ba-ba-ba loving it.

You write my OTP so well, hun!! Please keep up the awesome work!!!! I can't wait for the next chapter!!

[anyotherknight]

Thank you.

[anonymous]

That was long, but I like that. RyoDa forever. Tention -lol. Nice fic.

[anyotherknight]

Heh, sorry, but I did warn y'all it this was long. Thanks for commenting.