Selfish Love Is The Type We Share (2/2)

[octune]

Selfish Love Is The Type We Share
Dion Phaneuf, Luke Schenn
R || 12 000 words.
Disclaimer: Intended for entertainment purposes only. Title is borrowed from Riz MC's All of You No profit is being made, no libel intended.

note: conser requested an "angsty Dion-centric sequel" to In Transit, so she gets this, aka the Didi Phanneugle fic from hell. This was

Comments

[octune]

Thank you!

[sheilafranklin]

this story was just perfection. I'm not a leafs fan but this places in the top 2 hockey fics I have ever read easily.

The way you show their relationship developing is just amazing. Reading it, I had to stop and reread parts just because I loved them so much. The ending is great, glad it was happy because your characters are so great they made me feel~ for them so I would have been sad if it wasn't. But at the same time I like that it didn't come easily and maybe a lesser writer who doesn\'t know human relationships would have them be like "ok let's get back together we're so in love yay!"

errr, this has gotten too long and rambly so let me just say good job

[octune]

oh man, wow, am I ever blushing now. (thanks!)

[cindyannajones]

I read this before and I don't know why I didn't comment but I wanted to tell you how beautiful I think it is. I absolutely loved the ending, usually I'm more of a "more is more" kind of person but the way it ended with them wrapped up in bed together was perfect. I didn't need to read them talking everything out (although, I would love to see more of them if I'm being honest) because so much was said in their actions. That doesn't happen with a lot of stories.