[drabble(ish): sparky]

[odakota_rose]

hope is the thing with feathers
pretty much breaks away after 'Lifeline' and doesn't look back.
can you tell I don't like season 4?
angst + hope because I appear to be incapable of anything else
404 words
this was supposed to be a drabble for luxuria_oceanus for a set of poetic prompts she issued at spark_daily a loooong time ago. going through the great big folder of fic

Comments

[terranlily]

That LITERALLY gave me a shiver. I just love your style of writing and I'm so glad I decided to check in one last time before going to bed. (**plans search of Emily Dickinson tomorrow, looking for more gold to apply to Stargate ships**)

You just made me believe a believer!

[odakota_rose]

*hugs* *sheepish smile* *bigger hug*
I think I just got a huge case of the warm fuzzies. And I'm not quite sure what to say except thank you so very much for reading and loving it. (She's absolutely one of my favorite poets, I have a book of her poems that pretty much never gets too far from me *g*)

Hehe, awesome!

[odakota_rose]

*grin* (Yay for the Beatles, though :D)
*cough cough*yes, last September
heh.
I'm thinking I agree with you on that.. You can put a lot of feeling into a tiny package. Most of the fics that really hit me are the short ones..

*hugs* Thanks for reading/reviewing :D

[luxuria_oceanus]

ow ow ow hand hurts, hand hurts *have been studying all day, had to use hand* and is very sleepy (non-stop reading will do that to you) so I cannot form a proper praise-worthy thought at the moment, but I will say this.

*pokes* As if you ever ever have to apologize to me about anything (okay, if you manage to bang Nathan Fillion or David Tennant before me, you might have to, or else my feelings will seriously be hurt) Better late than never! And I love the verse of the poem you used at the end (OW, HAND, OW), it was very fitting with the entire thing. Now THAT'S what I would've like to have seen in the series, some part of John holding on and not giving up but noo-OW!

Okay, I'll stop now. Off to bed with me. I wonder if I can freeze a glove and wear it to bed tonight... *sigh*

Love my coffee bean (and don't worry, you're worth the extra pain :P )!

[odakota_rose]

*pats you*
Aww Ani, you must get some reast now, I command it to be so *nodnod*

*glomps*
(well if I ever get to David or Nathan before you, I shall send a suitable note of apology or some such.) hehe.
Aww, I'm glad you didn't mind the terrible wait of doom I put you through :D That's definitely what I wanted too. He was so positive for a while and then all of a sudden they all gave up *sporks SGA*

ouchies, *rubs your hand gently*
go sleep.

Love you tea leaf :)

[xfirefly9x]

Beautiful. Perfect. Awesome. I love this!! ♥

You've got to write more Sparky!! ;)

[odakota_rose]

*grin* Thanks! I can't quite remember when I wrote this, but then I opened it yesterday and went "Wait, huh? I wrote something I don't hate?! *shock*"
;)
Well I think if Sammi and bigbang have the desired effect, I shall be writing quite a bit of Sparky..

[xfirefly9x]

:) Hehe..

Awesome!! :D

[momm2five]

*sob*
seriously.
doesn't happen often that a fic, and a drabble at that, makes me tear up.

Beautiful. And perfectly right! LOL! Love it.

Oh, and can I friend you?

[odakota_rose]

*hugs* Thank you for reading!
I can't believe I got somebody to tear up...
:)

Friend away, I just added you :)