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Jun 21, 2005 23:58


her long ,raven black hair fell lightly down to frame her face, one side draped over her right eye and the other pulled back behind her ear revealing her cheak. she had an effortless beauty about her, an aura if you will, she was that rare natural type of beautifull, the type that not matter how much make-up she wore or what time it was she could ( Read more... )

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Wow, that was suspenceful. I think i just had a literary orgasim. jewgirlsays June 22 2005, 22:30:15 UTC
Dude, you should write a book or something that was incredible. I was hooked from the moment i started to read it. It was very exciting. Ok, so tell me more, what is her name, how did you meet her. What is it with you and smokers, you know thats bad for you, ya know, cuz you used to be one. And regretfully, i am still one. But i have cut down alot. i now only smoke socially(smiles proudly). Dude, i miss you, you should come to louisville the weekend that i go get amy and we should all hang. And were are you again, Chicago, florida, new york, i cant keep track. call me sometime, and go get her man tiger. Grrr.
Pigtails out

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Re: Wow, that was suspenceful. I think i just had a literary orgasim. odamadude June 23 2005, 01:45:53 UTC
i wrote this at about 3 am last night, i haven't seen this girl in a while, and did you just call me a man tiger?

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Re: Wow, that was suspenceful. I think i just had a literary orgasim. jewgirlsays June 23 2005, 01:57:23 UTC
y yes, yes i did, do you have a problem with that. if so you better bring it!!

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