Short story (read disclaimer) "Hawk Eyes"

[odin1970]

There are some new people on my LJ. From time to time I write short stories, some are sexually graphic, some are violent, some are purposely vague to invoke thought. All of them are adult in theme and content, if you choose to read further you are accountable for your emotional response (if any). Comments and discussion are always welcome to the

Comments

[danii]

That was good to read. Hmm. My vocabulary is a bit smaller than that, but it kept me interested anyway.

[odin1970]

Thanks for the comment. I have one question for you. As you read the story did you think the main charecter was watching a woman or a child?

[danii]

Well when I read it, I thought it was a woman the whole time, but then the ending kind-of made me unsure. So I didn't really think about it. Heh.
But I just read it again, but trying to think of it as being a child and not a woman, and.. I guess that makes sense, too.

So, it was a child wasn't it? Heh.

[odin1970]

It might have been, I wrote it with the intent that the reader could conclude it was either or.