Comments | odj: Final Draft

odj

Final Draft

Mar 07, 2007 16:25

She peeks at the catwalk from where she is standing. She’s twenty-one, standing backstage wearing a two-piece lingerie from Victoria’s Secret and awaiting for the cue for her to display the masterpiece. A tap on her shoulder and she walks down the lane and hears the tapping sound from her 5-inch hooker heels even though the music is loud enough ( Read more... )

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everynewemotion March 7 2007, 12:04:54 UTC

SIALA STORYTELLING. HAHHAHAHHAH

odj March 7 2007, 13:06:42 UTC

SIALA HOW YOU KNOWWW?
but yeah, this was for storytelling. i figured ryan already marked the draft so no more plagarism right?

everynewemotion March 7 2007, 13:08:42 UTC

EH U NEVER KNOW MAN

odj March 7 2007, 15:22:52 UTC

*GASP!* I HOPE NOT!

tickledmuffin March 8 2007, 04:48:36 UTC

i actually like this. my brain's so karat i probably can't write a decent paragraph now.. it's been design design design. i miss writing! :(

odj March 8 2007, 05:34:35 UTC

haha, thanks! this one was way different as compared to draft 1 but oh well, just to suit my lecturer's needs.

at least it's all over now, enjoy ur hols and write a paragraph! (don't have to be a decent one) :)